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英语短文改错,共十处D I would like to tell you something more about our school sports meetDear Jim,I would like to tell you something more about our school sports meet.It was holding on Oct.6th,it was a fine day.There were over 1000 student and teachers attended it .Wang _百度作业帮
英语短文改错,共十处D I would like to tell you something more about our school sports meetDear Jim,I would like to tell you something more about our school sports meet.It was holding on Oct.6th,it was a fine day.There were over 1000 student and teachers attended it .Wang Lin ,a student from my class won the 100-meters race.He finished the race in 12.6 seconds and broke the school record.The sports meet was really success.That was because we were all trying to do my best .Although I was not one of the winner,I was proud of that we had done Looking forward to receive your letterYours,Li Ping
Dear Jim,（首段顶格）I would like to tell you something （more去掉） about our school sports meet.It was holding（改成held,因为这是被动语态） on Oct.6th,（加and,因为这是并列分句） it was a fine day.There were over 1000 student（改成students） and teachers attended（改成attending,因为这里是主动关系而不是被动关系） it .Wang Lin ,a student from my class won the 100-meters （改成100-meter） race.He finished the race in 12.6 seconds and broke the school record.The sports meet was really（加“a”,表示一次成功） success.That was because we were all trying to do my（改成our） best .Although I was not one of the winner（改成winners,one of后接复数名词）,I was proud of that（改成what,what在宾语从句里充当宾语,that引导宾语从句时不在从句中充当任何成分） we had done.Looking forward to receive（改成receiving,因为look forward to中的to是介词） your letter.Yours,Li Ping
more去掉was holding改成held100-metres改成100-metrein改成atstudent改成studentssuccess改成successfulwere trying改成triedwinner改成winnersthat改成whatreceive改成receiving
I would like to tell you something【 more 删掉
】about our school sports meet。
held】 on Oct.6th,
it was a fine day. There were over 1000【 students】 and teachers【加who】 attended it . Wang Lin , ...

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