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请帮忙看一下这段话有没有语法错误？改正下。谢谢。
So could I share my favorite movie with you in English? Every child love cartoons. I love the Disney best when I was a little boy. The lion King taught me how to be brave. Beauty and beast told me what is love. All of them are my friends and they show me an amazing world I have never imagined.The Hollywood blockbuster, I think everyone loves it. Of course not except me. I still remember the word spoke by Reed In Shawshank “Some birds aren't meant to be cage, their feathers are just too bright.”. I think I am also a little bird, just waiting for the moment to fly higher and higher. What is your favorite? Could you recommend a movie for me? It’s my pleasure to watch it.
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很少一些错误。如果你是初一初二，还好。如果是高中，那你可要注意了。So could I share my favorite movie with you in English? Every child loves_ cartoon. I love Disney the best when I was a little boy. The _Lion King taught me how to be brave. Beauty and Beast told me what love is_. All of them are my friends and they show me an amazing world I have never imagined.There are Hollywood blockbusters, I think everyone loves them. Of course including me. I still remember the word spoken_ by Reed _in Shawshank Redemption “Some birds aren't meant to be caged_, their feathers are just too bright.”. I think I am also a little bird, just waiting for the moment to fly higher and higher.What is your favorite? Could you recommend a movie for me? It will be my pleasure to watch it.
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按照你说的，真的成功了，好开心，谢谢你！
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一楼sunskite的修改已经很完美啦~不再赘述。我就说下相关语法规则吧。1.每个小孩都喜欢卡通，every child是单数，动词要用第三人称单数形式。2.Lion King 电影名字要大写哦~（印在书上的一般都是斜体）这个小问题~3.tell sb +从句 的时候 从句要使用正常语序，比如He told me what he wanted.他告诉我他想要什么。4”.当然也包括我“这句话 用including更自然。5 sb说的什么话 用。。spoken by sb。因为话和人是被动的关系。6 Some birds aren't meant to be caged 同理 ，小鸟是”被“关在笼子里。7 至于最后一句 It’s my pleasure to watch it.语法上并没有问题，但我们一般习惯说It will be my pleasure to watch it.毕竟”看电影“是还没有发生的事。
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哪位高手 错帮我改改...谢谢呀急满意者另重赏Elva Hsiao days of busy New Year&#39;s Eve concert in Taipei Arena, but also worried about the mother sick yesterday, it is physically and mentally exhausted to the extremely weak, in order to perfect performances, early in the morning to the hospital to play a nutritional needles, steroids, and the whole scene is warm and the fans cheer sound of shouting, more For example, a &booster&, so that Duokuangerchu ELVA tears several times. &Sound of Music 2010 Hennessy Hyun E! VA Elva Hsiao WOW World Tour TAIPEI& first show, who spent 50 million Taiwan dollars to build, from 9:30 last night to sing separately nearly 3 hours, six men and six women were Surrounded by 12 dancers, Elva Hsiao incarnation of &10 beautiful God& transform 10 sets of construction cost of 600 million Chinese clothes. Echo &diamond days& a new image, ELVA aboard landing craft appeared a huge diamond, his hands turned into the same with the Transformers cone shape, a tear when she handmade diamond mask, the audience screamed nostalgic about those times. Song Biao Mei&#39;s friends appeared, but will perform with the high tide, ELVA playing a men&#39;s sense of singing Justin Timberlake songs, after her in China in the &Victoria&#39;s Secret,& the voice slowly rising from the center stage Sing &Diamond Sugar& when, ELVA good friend Yang Jinhua also show up, the two enjoyed a period of jazz. ELVA said: &This past few years, I met a lot of wishful endless things, on several occasions I have felt that God is using many ways to tell me: ELVA, drop the idea ... Then I found, probably because I have too much, so God give me some trials. Most importantly, let me also learn to cherish. & 原文：萧亚轩连忙台北巨蛋跨演唱忧母病昨实力交瘁体力支完美献唱早医院打营养针、类固醇满场歌迷热情呼喊加油打气声更像剂「强针」让ELVA眼泪数度夺眶「2010轩尼诗炫音乐EVA萧亚轩WOW世界巡演唱TAIPEI」首场表演砸<img class="word-replace" src="/api/getdecpic?picenc=0a万台币打造昨晚9点30唱近3<img class="word-replace" src="/api/getdecpic?picenc=0a007a男6共12名舞者簇拥萧亚轩化身「十美神」变换10套造价共600万元华服呼应「钻石」新形象ELVA搭乘巨钻石登陆艇现身双手变跟变形金刚造型尖锥扯手工打造钻石面具全场忘情尖叫友阿妹现身飙歌更演带向高潮ELVA反串男装觉唱贾斯汀歌阿妹「维利亚秘密」歌声缓缓自舞台央升起唱「钻石糖」ELVA挚友杨谨华现身两跳段爵士舞ELVA说：「几我碰尽意事情几我都觉爷用式告诉我：ELVA放弃吧…我才发现或许我拥太所要给我些试炼重要让我更珍惜」
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没任何语错误.
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谢吧..呃..既然没有错误的..就不给附加悬赏了哦..
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Physical exerciseWith the rising living standards, people do less exercise than before. For example, now many families have their own cars, and they would like to drive their own car instead of walking. But it’s not good for our health. We should do more exercise to keep our body healthy.We should only spend about 20 minutes every day. You can do some sports like running, playing basketball, playing volleyball and so on. You can also go for a walk with your families after dinner. Go hiking with your friends in weekends is
a good idea,too.Exercise has so many benefits for us. It can make our body more strong. And it also makes us feel relaxed. When you feel pressure, you would go out and do some exercise and you will feel much better.Physical exercise is good for us. I hope that everyone would like it.
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改致些问题需注意用词应该尽量避免重复healthyphysical exercise要体现自词汇丰富所换些近义词另外应该意识用些承启词汇句号隔句间要体现逻辑连接用些besideson the other handthereforeas a result 等等短语要靠平积累另外整文章主语用we you前统给别建议you要号召家起做we总要站读者角度考虑能力要用些句体现自语能力篇建议或提倡体育锻炼文章用几祈使句加叹号体现文字跃句型Physical exerciseWith the rising of living standards, people do less exercises
than before. For example, now many families have their own cars, and they would like to get around by car instead of walking. But it’s no good for our health. People should do more exercise to keep the body strong and active.We should only spend about 20 minutes every day. （what we should do is 20 minutes everyday）You can do some sports like running, playing basketball, playing volleyball and so on. You can also go for a walk with your families after dinner. Going hiking with your friends at weekends is
a good idea,too.Physical exercise
is of a great benefit to us. It can not only make our body stronger but also also makes us feel relaxed. When you have too much pressure, you would go out and do some exercise and you will feel much better.Physical exercise is good for us. I hope that everyone would like it.
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谢谢你们的帮忙哦，有几个都很不错的，可只能选一个最佳答案，就选了一个简单易懂点的，非常感谢啊！
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第段their own car 改their own cars第二段举例应该用such as应用like.第三段Exercise改Doing exercise第四段would改would better段would改will
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出门在外也不愁急，帮我看一下这篇英语作文有没有什么语法问题，帮我修改下，在线等_百度知道
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急帮我看篇英语作文没语问题我觉太帮我修改线等：职业选择重要选择能影响所定要选择喜欢或者擅职业于我说我喜欢职业企业经理我想我擅想名经理并容易首先我要习面相关知识经理必须识广博其我要与交流于经理说重要我努力朝面发展我要东西我想我色经理Career choice is a very important choice , may affect your lifetime. Occupation that you possibly are good at most therefore, must choose you liking it most. As for me, my most delighted occupation is an enterprise manager , I think that I am expert in most also may be this but, wants to think that one manager is really not so easy. Relevance knowledge that first, I ask to study many this aspect, necessary learning of a manager is extensive. Secondly, I ask learn to communicate with person , this is very important as for a manager. I am able to make great efforts to develop towards this aspect , I ask the thing learning to return many back. I think that I will become a outstanding manager.
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Career choice is very important,and may affect your lifetime. Thereforeplease make sure that the occupation you choose is the one you are good at or you like most. As for me,the occupation i like most is an enterprise manager . I think that I will be an expert in this field. However, being a manager is really not so easy. Relevant knowledge comes first. I set down to studying as much as i can in this area, because necessary learning of a manager is extensive. Secondly, I have to learn to communicate with others ,which is also very important for a manager. I am able to make great efforts to develop it towards my goal. Admittedly, there is a long way to achieve it.After all, I think that I will become an outstanding manager.按照原文改累死概……光语错误用词问题……请问英语水平初高要我帮另写篇吧……
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于我说我喜欢职业企业经理我想我擅 想名经理并容易首先我要习面相关知识经理必须识广博其我要与交流于经理说重要我努力朝面发展我要东西 我想我定色经理 Career choice is a very important choice , possibility affects your lifetime. Occupation that you possibly are good at most therefore, must choose you liking it most. As for me, my most delighted occupation is an enterprise manager , I think that I am expert in most also may be this, but, think that serving as one manager is really not so easy. Relevance knowledge that first, I ask to study many this aspect, necessary learning of a manager is extensive. Secondly, I ask learn to communicate with person , this is very important as for a manager. I am able to make great efforts to develop towards this aspect , I ask the thing learning to return many back. I think that I will become a outstanding manager.
的作文是 Career choice is a very important choice, which may affect your life. Therefore, we must choose your favorite or your best job. For me, my favorite job is the business manager, I think I will be best at this, However, If you want to be a manager is not so easy. First of all, I have to learn a lot of knowledge, a manager must be broad knowledge. Secondly, I would like to learn to live with people exchanges, for a manager, this is very important. I will work hard towards the development in this field, I would like to learn a lot. I think I will become an excellent manager
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有没有大侠帮我看看这句有没有语法错误啊？
The assessment is traditionally performed by trained expert panels, which is usually bone-breaking and easily affected by subjective factors or even biased.
后面那个从句的部分有语法错误吗？easily前面要不要加is啊？那even前面呢？谢谢大家了先
应该是OK的，反正我是看出来你想表达什么意思。& &至于is，后面的都可以省略啊。 The assessment is traditionally performed by trained expert panels, whom are usually bone-breaking and easily affected by subjective factors or even biased. 没有问题，很地道啊。 : Originally posted by qxzhao88 at
The assessment is traditionally performed by trained expert panels, whom are usually bone-breaking and easily affected by subjective factors or even biased. 首先从whom are usually bone-breaking就不对了 The assessment is traditionally performed by trained expert panels that are usually bone-breaking and easily affected by subjective factors or even biased.我觉得你的意思不是很公正并且很招恨，小心expert panels告你诬陷:D 非常地道，没有任何问题。Which从句是三个并列的句子省略动词is而成，即
The assessment is usually bone-breaking
The assessment is easily affected by subjective factors
The assessment is even biased.
三个句子通过which修饰Assessment 同意七楼的分析。并列句中吗，相同成分省略在英语中很常见。 Just Studying 有点歧义，even biased和谁并列？如果是factors，biased就应该用名词；如果和前面句子就应该把or换成逗号更好。个人意见！ biased和谁并列？如果和factors就应该用名词；如果和句子最好把or换成逗号更好：The assessment is traditionally performed by trained expert panels, which is usually bone-breaking and easily affected by subjective factors， even biased. : Originally posted by shiyou114 at
有点歧义，even biased和谁并列？如果是factors，biased就应该用名词；如果和前面句子就应该把or换成逗号更好。个人意见！ even biased是指assessment，不是factors. 的确比较平常的并列是xxx, yyy, zzz and ppp. 但此处用or 而不是and 是多少想强调even biased， 因为作者语气上有这个倾向。 or 换成逗号是不妥的，换成and 可以，但语气不同。
与9楼商榷 even biased是指assessment，不是factors. 的确比较平常的并列是xxx, yyy, zzz and ppp. 但此处用or 而不是and 是多少想强调even biased， 因为作者语气上有这个倾向。 or 换成逗号是不妥的，换成and 可以，但语气不同。
与9楼商榷 最后那个词应该是bias，跟subjective factors并列，应该用名词。 : Originally posted by befair at
even biased是指assessment，不是factors. 的确比较平常的并列是xxx, yyy, zzz and ppp. 但此处用or 而不是and 是多少想强调even biased， 因为作者语气上有这个倾向。 or 换成逗号是不妥的，换成and 可以，但语气 ... biased不是用来修饰assessment的吧，说不通啊。
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