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出门在外也不愁Doing a part-time job.—My Most Rewarding Experience
As one of my most rewarding experiences, doing a part-time job has benefited me a lot in my life. On the one hand, doing a part-time job in my own school can provide me with some money which will ease the financial burden of my family. In addition, unlike doing a part-time job outside school, it offers me much freedom to arrange my study and work time more reasonably, which will not influence my study. On the other hand, doing a part-time job during university period can not only improve my communication skills effectively, but also urge me to be more patient than ever before. What is more, through the part-time job, I have more opportunities to foster my all-round ability and I have sharpened my will, too. What is the most unexpected result that amazes me later of doing so is that I gradually become more optimistic and more positive which brings me more good friends. Besides, I know how many difficulties my parents should overcome and how much responsibility they should take. Now I tend to meet people much more actively and study hard. In short, there is nothing more beneficial and meaningful than doing a part-time job that I will never forget during my life.
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加从句的使用;文章结构严谨,有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;副词使用偏多
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As one of my most rewarding experiences, doing a part-time job has benefited me a lot in my life.
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 do...job 在教材中出现过
[学习提示] 易混词汇: profession, job, occupation, trade, vocation, career, work, employment 均含“职业”之意。&&
[批改提示] benefit近义表达有help/ improve/ assist/ enhance/ serve&&
On the one hand, doing a part-time job in my own school can provide me with some money which will ease the financial burden of my family.
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 do...job 在教材中出现过
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 ease...burden 在教材中出现过
[学习提示] 易混词汇: burden, cargo, load 均有“负担,负荷”之意。&&
[批改提示] provide的近义表达有lend或offer。&&
In addition, unlike doing a part-time job outside school, it offers me much freedom to arrange my study and work time more reasonably, which will not influence my study.
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 influence...study 在教材中出现过
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 arrange...time 在教材中出现过
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 offer...freedom 在教材中出现过
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 do...job 在教材中出现过
[学习提示] 易混词汇: organize, arrange, classify, sort 均含“使有条理,安排”之意。&&
On the other hand, doing a part-time job during university period can not only improve my communication skills effectively, but also urge me to be more patient than ever before.
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 do...job 在教材中出现过
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 improve...skill 在教材中出现过
[学习提示] 易混词汇: communication, traffic, transportation 均有“交通”之意。&&
[批改提示] 注意ago与before区别。&&
[批改提示] urge近义表达有prompt/ pressurize/ exhort&&
What is more, through the part-time job, I have more opportunities to foster my all-round ability and I have sharpened my will, too.
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...opportunity 在教材中出现过
[学习提示] 易混词汇: ability, capacity, capability, genius, talent, competence, faculty, gift, aptitude 均可表示人的“能力,才能”之意。&&
[批改提示] too和either都有“也,亦都”的意思。too用于肯定句,either用于否定句。&&
[批改提示] through的近义表达有,in term of,。&&
What is the most unexpected result that amazes me later of doing so is that I gradually become more optimistic and more positive which brings me more good friends.
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 bring...friend 在教材中出现过
[学习提示] 易混词汇: surprise, amaze, astonish, astound, startle, stun 均含“使惊愕,使惊讶,使惊奇”之意。 &&
Besides, I know how many difficulties my parents should overcome and how much responsibility they should take.
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 overcome...difficulty 在教材中出现过
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 take...responsibility 在教材中出现过
[学习提示] 易混词汇: difficulty, hardship 都表示“困难”之意。&&
[批改提示] know近义表达有cognize/ recognize/ realize/ foreknow&&
[批改提示] besides表示“除了(包括)”。注意与except的区别。&&
Now I tend to meet people much more actively and study hard.
[学习提示] 易混词汇: meet, encounter, confront, face, contact 均有“遇见,会见,碰见”之意。&&
[批改提示] people表示“人,民族”。查看与的区别。&&
In short, there is nothing more beneficial and meaningful than doing a part-time job that I will never forget during my life.
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 do...job 在教材中出现过
[学习提示] 易混词汇: beneficial, advantageous, profitable 均含有“有益的,有利的”之意。&&
[批改提示] 批改提示,注意beneficial与beneficent的区别。&&I spent most of my time complaining like all the rest of the taxi drivers do什么意思_百度知道
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