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搞定TOEFL Essay-integrated essay结构和写作篇
integrated essay，中文称之为综合性论文。本文是一篇integrated essay指导性文章，主要介绍什么是integrated essay，integrated essay的结构和一些基本的技巧。
The first essay on the TOEFL is the integrated task.& In this section you will first read a short article about an academic topic and after that you will listen to a lecture on the same topic.
The lecture will oppose the reading.& Your job is to describe&how&the lecture opposes the article.& You may only listen to the lecture once, but you will have access to the article while you are writing your essay.
You need to be a good listener in order to complete this task.& You must also be a good note-taker.& These are skills that you should practice before taking the test.
How the Article is Structured
Be aware of the structure of the material you will be given. The article will have a&main idea&which will be supported by three reasons.& For example, the main idea of the reading might be:
"Living in the city is better for children than living in the country."
While the supporting reasons might be:
The city has more educational opportunities
The city has better recreational facilities
The city has more job opportunities for children when they grow up
The main idea will be stated in the first paragraph of the article, while each of the reasons will be stated in individual paragraphs.
How the Lecture is Structured
The lecture also has a predictable structure. It will have an opposite main point, like:
"Living in the country is better for children than living in city."
The lecture will then address the points from the reading one by one.& In the above case, the reasons it gives might be something like this:
City schools have more violence and drugs than country schools.
The country has lots of nature for children to play in and enjoy
Children don't need jobs, and they can move to the city when they grow up, if necessary
The points made in the lecture are always given one at a time.& They always directly oppose the points made in the article.
How to Take Notes
Good note-taking is essential to this part of the test.& I teach my students to use a note-taking and outlining system like the following:
Writing the Essay
It is best to use a four paragraph structure for your essay.& Write an introduction and three body paragraphs.
The Introduction
Start with a sentence like&"The article and the lecture are about..."&followed by&"The author of the article feels that..."& Continue with a transitional sentence like&"The lecturer disagrees with the author of the article."& Conclude with "He says that..."
For the above topic our introduction would be something like this:
"The article and the lecture are about the best place for a child to group up.& The author of the article feels that living in the city is best for children.& The lecturer disagrees with the author.& He says that it is better for a child to live in the country than in the city."
And that's it.& Keep your introduction short and sweet.& You don't have much time to write this essay!
The Body Paragraphs
You should write one short body paragraph for each of the points (and counterpoints/supports) in the outline above.& Be sure to include as many details as you can.& Details from the lecture are more impressive (since you only get to listen to it once), but remember that it is also necessary to include details from the reading.& Keep in mind that you cannot COPY details from the reading.& Use your own words.
Here are some basic tips:
Begin your first body paragraph with&"First"&your second with&"second"&and your third with&"third."
When transitioning from discussing the article to discussing the lecture, use transitional phrases like&"the lecturer challenges these claims by stating that..."&or&"the lecturer casts doubt on this claim."&&If the lecture supports the reading, try phrases like&"the lecturer supports this claim by..."&or&"the lecturer reinforces the reading by..."
Don't use boring phrases like "he says that."& Try something like&"he observes that,"&"he claims that"&or"he suggests that."
Here's a sample body paragraph using the example given above:
"First, the author claims that living in the city is better because cities have more educational opportunities for children.& He points out that there are more schools for parents to choose from.& He also mentions that there are more amenities like museums, art galleries and academic clubs for students to join.& The lecturer casts doubts on these claims by referring to the problems with urban schools.& He observes that schools in cities have higher violence and drop-out rates than schools in the country.& He suggests that this can have a negative effect on the academic future of children."
and that's how you write a body paragraph for the integrated task.& Just remember that it is essential that you write about both the article and the lecture.& You will get a very low score (or zero) if you write only about the article.
To help you understand the basic structure of the essay, below is an outline of the INTEGRATED ESSAY without the content. I’ve underlined key phrases and transition words.
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很多初入的学生，也许会集中精力在作文的用词和句子，或是整理一下优秀的范文进行背诵。反而，忽视了一个最为关键的环节，就是文章的结构。那么，在写作中，常被大家提到的五段式结构又是怎样的呢?下面我们就为大家详细的介绍一下吧。
不论是comparison & contrast essay还是argument
essay，它们的文章结构基本相同。分为3大部分和5段结构(Point-by-Point Format), 也许有人喜欢4段(即Block
Format),但就初来乍到者，我还是建议他们使用Point-by-Point Format,
并且依据我老师的经验(Jeff)来看，北美人更加喜欢这种结构(其实因为这些老外每天都要批阅几十篇文章，他们已经不阅读文章的内容，仅仅是审查文章的结构和词汇，他们没有时间去对比Block
Format结构中的问题或者论点)，这令我很吃惊，这与国内老师的意见相驳或者相反。
这篇经验我想用一个例子(Coffee and
tea)来向大家解释，有可能我的例子不是很好，或者论点有些可笑，不过我想大家还是要记住，老外已经在iBT中说明，他们不关心你的论点(Issue/Top
Sentences)
和论据(Details/Evidence)是否合情合理，只关心你的论据(Details/Evidence)是否可以证明你的论点，仅此而已。大家在稍后的文章中可以看到，我的3个论点中的2个比较controversial,
但是，在我的Detail中支持的好就可以了。
首先，谈一谈5段式结构和Body Paragraph的结构：
Introduction Paragraph：Say what you are going to say.
这个我想不用我多说了，就是文章的“引子”，你的文章是否有高分，这个很重要。这样的句子不要出现，例如：In my essay, I will
demonstrate…。下面的句子Jeff称之为Ok Sentence,即可以出现的句子，例如：Tea is the best drink in the
world. 或者可以使用五星级的句子，例如：Although Coke is becoming more popular, it can not
replace China’s love of tea.
Background / Definition:
重新描述问题，但是不要使用老外给你的题目原话，这里我可以说，如果你使用了原话，不会对你的文章产生任何不好的影响，只是你不会在这里拿到应该得到的分数而已。你可以写成为
Tea is the most popular hot drink in the world.
Thesis: 中心句，如果文章不是argument essay，请不要直接在句子中表达自己的意见或者用一种General的形式来表达大家的意见,
例如：Tea is the world’s favorite drink because it provides health benefits, it is
less expensive, and it is available in many varieties.
Forecasting: 见关键词解释。Because后面的3个简单句就是Forecasting。
Body Paragraph I:
Top Sentence: First，Tea is healthier to drink. (OK-Sentence)Jeff推荐的句子Drank by
million of people, tea is… (分词开头-ed)，再如：Improving your health, tea is
drank…(动名词开头-ing)，又如：For thousands of years, tea is…(General 开头)
Detail: 这个不用多说了，就是要把你的例子举出来了。For example, people who drink tea, live longer,
healthier lives than these who drink coffee.
Befriend:这个是重点了，要把拳头收回来。例如：Although coffee is good for your health, it cause
heart attacks in large amounts.
Support:这个时候需要你利用你事实作为拳头伸出去，例如：In fact, heart attacks are one of the leading
causes of death, so tea is a better drink according to doctor’s suggestion.
Concluding
Sentence:最后要简单扼要的总结一下，你在这段的论点和论据，其原理就像是简易书架，你只有两边都有支撑的面，你的书才不会向没有支撑面的那边倒去。可能有些朋友认为这个比较麻烦或者多余，不过我还是建议大家要包含这个部分，例如：To
sum up, tea is healthier in several ways compared to coffee.
Body Paragraph II: 结构如上述，我就不多说了。
Body Paragraph III: 同上。
Conclusion Paragraph: 关于Conclusion我还是要多说两句，通常老外喜欢用Conclusion作为整篇文章的结尾用词，而用to
sum up等作为段落的总结。例如：Despite the fact that coffee consumption is increasing, it
will never be as beneficial as tea. Tea is less expensive, comes in more
varieties, and is healthier. In conclusion, tea will remain the best drink until
humans invent something better.
顺便提及一下，有的朋友会问，是否可以变化一下Body
Paragraph的结构，我的建议是不要变化，不信的话，您可以自己尝试一下把你的文章重新排一下，您就会知道这里面的区别了。
再谈一下comparison & contrast essay 和argument essay的区别：
在我看来，它们之间的区别有两点。第一点，作者的视角不同。何谓视角不同?即当你写argument essay的时候，你需要在Introduction
Paragraph中的Thesis中表达作者支持哪一方面。第二点，对比方面在文章中所占的份额，即如果你在写comparison & contrast
essay时，比例为40%(一方面的优点)和60%(另一方面的优点和缺点)，虽然是comparison & contrast essay,
但是我想作为作者，你怎么也要表达一下自己的意见或者意图，让读者明白你是虽然在作两件事物的比较，但是还是有你的偏好在里面(喜欢Reading的朋友会有这种体会)。在写argument
essay 时，比例为10%(敌对方的缺点)和90%(支持方的优点针对敌方缺点和无伤大雅的支持方缺点)。
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