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3秒自动关闭窗口2013年高考英语试题汇编短文改错与写作
late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that
might not be served until 8 o'clock at night. This custom soon
becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by
the British porcelain (瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally
drank from cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain,
there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British
habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain
Here I am in the middle of a city,350 miles far away from our
farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his
job，and as Mom explained, “He was lucky to find other one.” His new
job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate,& my school or just
everything else I& love& in the world. To make
matters bad,& now I have to share a
room with my younger sister，Maggie. Tomorrow is first day of
school. I am awfully tiring，but I know I'll never fall
Good night and& remember, you, dear
souvenir from my past life and my only friend.
Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty, but I
tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary,& my best friend,
asking me to let her to copy my answers. After think for some time,
I let her copy my answers. But after the test，all of us were called
to the teacher's office. The teacher was angry because we had same
answers in the tests. We were warned not to cheat again so she
would need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didn't cheat. I
was just helping a friend. Why does she punish
假设你是某大学的学生李津。你校英语俱乐部将选举新一届副主席，负责规划、组织俱乐部的相关活动。你欲参选。请按以下提示，写一篇竞选演讲稿。
◇个人优势介绍(如性格、特长等)；
◇组织校内活动的设想(如举办讲座、英语晚会等)；
◇组织校际交流活动的设想(如举办辩论赛、演讲比赛等)；
◇表达当选的愿望。
1.词数不少于100；
2.请勿提及真实学校名称；
3.可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；
4.开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
副主席& vice
竞选 run for
Good afternoon, my dear friends.
My name is Li
Jin.________________________________________________________________________
调查显示，中国长江江豚(finless&
porpoise)受人类活动影响而濒临灭绝，目前总数不足1000只。假设你是李华，现请用英文给WWF(世界自然保护基金组织)写一封信，请他们关注这一状况并提供帮助。内容应包括：
●简述江豚现状
●希望WWF如何帮助(比如：资助江豚保护项目等)
●表示感谢并期待回复
(2)书信格式及开头均已给出(不计入总词数)。
I'm a student from& Chongqing,
China.________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely，
假设你校英语社团举办以“讲求文明，从我做起”为主题的征文活动，请你以“On the Way to
School”为题，写一篇英语短文。
内容主要包括：
1.遵守交通法规；
2.注意举止文明。
1.词数120左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
4.短文的题目已为你拟好，不计入总词数。
某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏，讨论学习习惯问题。请你结合自身学习实际，按以下提示，用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件。
1.说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系；
2.介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议；
3.描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进措施。
注意：1.词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；
星光中学(Xingguang High
School)近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者，请写一篇短文，报道此次活动。内容包括：
1.时间与地点：4月10日，大青山(Daqing Mountain)；
2.活动的过程；
3.你对于这次活动的评论。
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，用英语写一篇周记，记述爸爸出差期间，妈妈生病，你照顾她的过程。
注意：1.周记的开头已经为你写好。
2.词数不少于60。
孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题，现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。请阅读下面的漫画，按要求用英文写一篇短文。
内容要求：
1.描述漫画内容；
2.分析漫画所揭示的问题；
3.提出你的看法。
1.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯；
3.词数120左右；
4.文中不能出现考生的具体信息。
参考词汇：铺路pave the way
请根据你对以下两幅图的理解，以“Actions Speak Louder than
Words”为题，用英语写一篇作文。
参考词汇：
banner(横幅)
'stump(树桩)
你的作文应包括以下内容：
1.简要描述两幅图的内容；
2.概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解；
3.举例说明两幅图对你的启示。
1.可参照图片适当发挥；
2.作文词数150左右；
3.作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Actions Speak Louder than Words
请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。
You are discussing
the following picture with your English friend Jim. Now you are
telling him how you understand the picture and what makes you think
请以“One Thing I'm Proud
of”为题，用英语写一篇100－120个词的短文，记述一件你自己认为得意的事情。要求如下：
1.记述事情经过；
2.简要说明你感到得意的原因或从中得到的启示。
注意：文章的标题已给出(不计词数)。
that不能引导非限制性定语从句。
cup是可数名词，与第六句中的cups without handles一样要用其复数形式。
spend...on&
sth.(在某事上花费……)是固定短语。
let后用不定式作宾补，需省略不定式符号to。
2.内容要点：
①说明写信目的；
②请求Peter接机；
③介绍李明外貌特征；
④说明航班号、飞机到达时间。
3.参考词汇及句型：attend a conference/go for a conference开会；meet sb. at the
airport接机；the flight number航班号；Would you please...？/Could you help
me to...? /Would you mind...?
and I've asked him to
bring you the Chinese painting you've asked for before.
Also, I'd like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle
at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is his first
visit to the U．S.?& Thank you in
His flight number is CA985,& and it will arrive at
11∶30 am,&
August 6. My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. And he will
be in a blue jacket.
I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me. I made them
myself with red silk threads, cloth and other materials. They look
really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and
4 inches wide. In China, these knots stand for friendship, love and
good luck. People& can either give them
as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses. They
dollars each. If anyone wants to know& more& about the
write to me. Also,& do let me know if you
need further information. Thank you!
1.本文可分三段。第一段开门见山，指出自己要竞选副主席一职；第二段根据提示介绍自己的个人优势及工作设想；第三段介绍当选愿望。
2.人称需用第一人称，时态以现在时、过去时为主。
3.参考短语：have& strengths& in，hold& lectures。
vice president of our
school English club.
As is known to everyone，I once served as monitor in Junior school
the top monitor in Junior 2,& so I have strengths
in management. In order to& make our school life
more abundant and colorful, I can manage to hold some& interesting lectures
and English parties. What's more,& I shall hold some
competitions，such as a debate on how to study efficiently and an
English speech&&
contest to improve our ability to communicate with each
I'd be appreciated if I I will do whatever I can
to lend a hand to others.
are faced with& presently.
It's because of human activities that finless porpoises are
endangered. It's amazing that there are merely less than 1, 000
finless porpoises living in China. Thus，it's high time that
immediate measures should be taken. Don't you think so? If
possible,&
how I hope you can help us by funding our project aimed at
protecting finless porpoises. With your financial aid, I am
convinced more finless porpoises will survive. I would appreciate
it greatly if you considered my application.
Looking forward to your early reply.
1.本文为提纲类的说明文；人称为第一人称；基本时态为一般现在时。
2.内容要点：
(1)介绍中秋节是中国的传统节日之一；
(2)描写家人团聚；
(3)描写赏月和吃月饼的情景；
(4)描写旅游、访友等其他活动。
3.参考词汇和短语：
Mid&Autumn Festival'&&
农历lunar calendar
the full moon '& 月饼moon
走亲访友visit
relatives or friends
we will try to come
home for the celebration. The moon that night looks the brightest
in the whole lunar month. What we love most is the& time we enjoy the
full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit
together and eat moon cakes and fruit,& sharing our stories.
In addition to these traditional activities, we have a wider range
of choices such as travelling and visiting our relatives or
1.本文为记叙文；人称为第一人称；基本时态为一般现在时。
2.内容要点
①用不文明现象引题；②介绍自己遵守交通法规；③介绍自己举止文明。
3.参考词汇和短语：
keep/break traffic rules遵守/违反交通规则& traffic
lights交通灯regard...as...认为……是……
These days,& breaking traffic
rules and littering are not uncommon,& causing serious harm
to life and the environment. Changing this situation requires
considerable effort on the part of everyone. As for me,& it should start on my
way to school.
I will keep traffic rules in mind all the way. If I ride a
bike，I'll always keep to the right and never cross a road until the
traffic light turns green. If I walk, I'll never forget to use the
pedestrian&
crossing.&
Meanwhile, I will regard it as my duty to help keep our environment
clean and healthy. Not only will I keep from littering and spitting
anywhere, I will also help clean up the roadside whenever possible.
I hope my behavior will make a difference.
本文属于介绍说明类，建议用第一人称，基本时态为一般现在时。
1.说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系；
&2.介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议；
3.描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进措施。
Making full use of time is a good habit, which requires one to plan
carefully. For example,& one should
schedule, including what time&&
meals,& go
to bed and relax. Above all,& do fix time to study
every subject，adjusting it depending on different situations. Every
day put down what has been completed and what hasn't been
completed.
As a student, I often waste much time doing nothing as a
consequence of having no good habits，especially not being ahle to
plan time properly. I think planning does help one achieve
everyone should form this good habit,& and try to stick to
1.本文可分三段来写，第一段大体交代有该项活动，第二段详细描述活动过程，第三段描述活动带来的影响。
2.因为描述一项过去的活动，时态以一般过去时为主。
3.要点要齐全，使用适当连接词使语句连贯。
to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise,& our school organized
a mountain&climbing on April 10. Hundreds of us
took part in it.
It was a nice day. At 8∶00, we gathered at the foot of Daqing
Mountain and set out for the top in high spirits. All the way we
were chatting, singing and& laughing,& enjoying the fresh
air and the beautiful& scenery. When some
fell behind, others would come and offer help. About 2& hours
later,& we
all reached the top. Bathed in the sunshine，we jumped and cheered
The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it get us close to
nature and give us relaxation from heavy schoolwork，it also
promoted the friendship among us. What a wonderful time!
some medicine and
then prepared some noodles for her. With my special care, my mother
recovered quickly. When my father came back home, my mother told
him what had happened. He praised me for what I had
I feel very happy that I have done something for my
1.本文建议主要使用第三人称，基本时态为一般现在时；
2.内容要点：
(1)描述漫画内容；
(2)分析漫画所揭示的问题；
(3)提出你的看法。
3.参考词汇及句型：
well dressed穿着考究的，bend forward朝前弯腰，shoulder the hope
of...肩负……的期望，spare no effort不遗余力，as a consequence结果，It shows a
common phenomenon that...表明……的普遍现象
It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus
of families，shouldering the hope of their parents. Parents arrange
everything for& their children and
spare no effort to pave the way for their success. As a
consequence，children become so reliant on their parents that they
have no independent thought or creative ideas.
Such a situation is of great concern. In my opinion,& overprotection and
much care are extremely bad for children's development. Instead of
doing everything for them,& parents should
encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them
to develop by themselves. Only in this way can they
grow& up to
be independent and become truly successful.
1.本文可分三段来写：第一段交代两幅图画的内容；第二段描述自己对这两种做法的看法；第三段写这两种行为给我们日常生活带来的启示。
2.本文描述某种日常生活中的现象，动词时态应该用一般现在时。
3.合理使用连接词和从句。
People celebrate Earth Day differently. In Picture 1,& a man is trying to
put up a banner on a lonely tree surrounded by stumps,& but in
while Picture 2 shows a couple happily planting trees.
The message conveyed here is clear:& “Actions speak louder
than words.” Our earth is suffering severe damage. Should we just
pay lip service or take practical measures to protect it? The
answer is definitely the latter. Immediate actions& should be
stopping cutting down& trees,& to better the
environment.
Actions are important in other fields, too. Instead of shouting
empty slogans，it is more meaningful to donate books and sports
goods to children in need. We& should& strictly and
voluntarily follow traffic rules,& stopping at the red
light rather than complaining about traffic jams. Only when we
match our words with actions can we make a difference in whatever
we hope to accomplish.
instead of the big fish he wishes for，he actually catches a small
one. In my opinion，people need to learn to accept the reality and
keep on trying. With another try, they may gain what they dream
1.本书面表达内容建议分为两部分，第一部分应该是一个典型的事例，第二部分是总结和感想。
2.时态也需要两种，举事例部分主要用一般过去时，而总结反思和感想部分应该用一般现在时。
I still remember how I became a good table tennis
The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmates
playing table tennis. Amazed at how skilful they were, I was
determined to be just as good. Later on,& I often watched them
carefully to learn their techniques. Then I kept practising until I
became confident enough to challenge the good players. At the end
of the term I became one of the best players in my
I am really proud of this experience, because it helps me realise
that we all can fulfil our potential and achieve our goals through
hard work. It also helps me better understand the proverb“Practice
makes perfect.”
1.本文属于夹叙夹议类题型，属于开放式作文，建议使用第一人称或第三人称，可以采用先叙事后议论的写作方法，基本时态为一般过去时；
2.内容要点：①记叙自己或他人的一次经历；②你的感受；
3.关键词：match，winner，loser，result。
it& didn't
work out as we had expected. The other team did really better than
ours in the matching field. We were not the winner；we were the
loser. Knowing the result, we were extremely depressed.
From this experience, I realized working hard doesn't definitely
lead to success，but we were happy that we had done our
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