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　　【题目】某英文报以An Unforgettable Day (《难忘的一天》) 为题，面向中学生开展征文活动，请你写一篇短文参加此次活动。
　　内容包括：
　　1、哪一天让你感到难忘；
　　2、什么事（开心的、伤心的或是有特别意义的，&&）让你感到那天难忘；
　　3、那一天你经历了什么；
　　4、那天的经历对你有什么影响或者你有什么感受。
　　要求：
　　1、80-100 词；
　　2、文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
　　【参考范文】
　　An Unforgettable Day
　　I&ll never forget June 11th, 2012.
　　It was a sunny day. On the way to school, my friend did something rude to me. It made me sad. What&s worse, I got a &C& in my favorite subject.
　　After school, I went home unhappily. It was dark in the room. Suddenly the lights were on, and I heard the song &Happy birthday&. I was surprised to see many people and a big cake. &Oh, it&s my birthday.& I was so excited and happy. It was my first time to have a birthday party.
　　I&ll never forget that day.
　　【解析】
　　试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，要求根据自己的回忆以一篇叙事性短文,记述自己难忘的一件事情。动笔前先要认真阅读写作提示,注意从四个方面进行叙述。由于是回忆性短文，故用过去时态较多，注意时态和时间状语的搭配。写作中选取自己比较熟悉的内同写，注意适当使用连词，序数词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系,不要犯语法书写的低级错误。
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还记得发生在你身上最难忘的一次经历吗?请以“An unforgettable experience”为题写一篇短文，描述一次难忘的经历，并谈谈你的感想。要求：1. 词数80左右。文中不得出现真实的校名、姓名。2. 开头已给出。不计入总词数。An Unforgettable Experience Everyone has some unforgettable experiences. ___________________________&&&
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Everyone has some unforgettable experiences. I had a very unforgettable experience when I was 11 years old. I had some training with my classmates. We went to Fengxian and we needed to live in a small dormitory for two days. We did everything ourselves. Our parents couldn’t help us, because they didn’t stay with us. We got up very early in the morning. We had to clean ourselves quickly. And then we stood in a line. We leant a lot of things there, such as cooking, washing and even making beds. Every day, we had to practice more than five hours. Now I think it was very hard for everyone but it was very good for us. Because we are looked after by our parents, but in fact should learn how to look after ourselves. What an unforgettable experience it is!试题分析：本题要求以“An unforgettable experience”为题写一篇短文，描述一次难忘的经历，并谈谈你的感想。根据要求可知本文应以第一人称书写，主要使用一般过去时态。在写作时要适当使用一些连接词，使文章前后连贯，符合逻辑关系。【亮点说明】本文中多次使用连接词and、but等使得文中前后连贯。
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Here are the results of my survey. 2. According to the graph, we can find… 3. The chart reflects several trends.& 4. We can find many important changes in…& 5. From the diagram, we know that... 对于线性图表的描述：上升1. 对于上升趋势的描述：a. 可以使用的动词或动词词组：to increaseto go upto riseto growto jumpto leapto soarto shootto pick upb. 可以使用的名词：an increasea growtha jumpa soaran upward trend2. 对于上升到某个位置的描述：a. 1. a. 中的动词＋to＋具体数据。b. 1. a. 中的动词＋to＋the peak of＋具体数据。c. 1. a. 中的动词＋reaching the peak of +具体数据。d. 1. a. 中的动词＋reaching + 具体数据。e. to peak at ＋ 具体数据f. to climb to + 具体数据3. 对于上升的程度的描述：a. 1. a. 中的动词＋by ＋ 具体数据。b. 1. a. 中的动词＋副词。下降1. 对于下降趋势的描述：a. 可以使用的动词或动词词组：to fallto decreaseto go downto slideto collapseto declineto dropb. 可以使用的名词：a collapsea decreasea falla declinea drop2. 对于下降到某个位置的描述：a. 1. a. 中的动词＋to＋具体数据。b. 1. a. 中的动词＋to＋the bottom of＋具体数据。c. 1. a. 中的动词＋reaching the bottom of +具体数据。d. 1. a. 中的动词＋reaching + 具体数据。3. 对于下降程度的描述：a. 1. a. 中的动词＋by ＋ 具体数据。b. 1. a. 中的动词＋副词。（见对于平稳的趋势的描述：可以使用的动词或动词词组：to hardly changeto have little changeto keep steadyto level offto remain constantto stay the same表示程度的副词：1. 程度较大：considerablydramaticallygreatlymarkedlyobviouslyquicklyrapidlysharplysignificantlysuddenly2. 程度较小：slightlygraduallyslowlysteadily时间的嵌入嵌入时间时所使用的介词和介词词组：infrom……to……between……。and……during……and……at the start of ……by the end of ……over ……at the end of ……throughout ……时间's + 具体数据上升和下降趋势的组合描述：（嵌入了时间和程度之后）1. 先上升后下降的句型：…… increased slowly& during…… and …… but fell sharply in ……。A steady fall in …… during …… and …… followed the sharp increase in ……。2. 先下降后上升的句型：…… fell before …… began to make a recovery ………… continue the recovery， climbing to ………… dropped during …… but increased again in ………… fell and then pick up during ………… collapsed before rising to ……at the end of ……3. 起伏波动的句型：…… fluctuated sharply all through ……4. 波动不大的句型：…… hardly changed through the period between ……and ……柱状图形的描述转换为线形图形的描述饼状图形的描述对于百分比进行描述所使用的句型：…… % the …… is/has/have/are ………… accounts for ……% of the total…… takes up ……% in the whole chart趋势的比较：1. 表示相似的句型 （实例） ：Both share prices rose sharply in January.Neither company has made a profit yet.Like X， Y fell in June.X rose just as sharply as Y.2. 表示差异的句型（实例）：X fell sharply whereas/while Y remained steady.X fell quickly compared to Y.Unlike Y， X rose by 10%.X rose far more dramatically than Y.3. 表示倍数的句型：the …… doubled/tripled in …… compared with those in ……4. 客观比较的句型：…… is …… in contrast to ……数据的修饰：1. 表示不足的词或词组：up tobelowunderalmostnearly2. 表示超过的词或词组：overmore thanjust over3. 表示大约的词：about小作文：多指便条、请假条等，在写作的时候要注意文章的格式（称呼、正文、签名、日期）。初中便条、请假条格式：一、便条1. 便条一般指简洁的书面留言，常用于朋友、同事或家庭成员之间，内容包括：提供信息、安排活动、表示抱歉、提出要求或咨询等。邀请发言、请假条也属便条之列。行文用词简洁明了、目的明确。2. 便条内容简单明了。不写与要转达的口信无关的内容。同学们经常易犯这方面的错误，写一些多余的话。3. 格式与书信类似，但是称呼只写对话的名字，不必加客套词 dear 之类，除非对年长者。结尾只签自己的名字或称谓。4. 经常用简略句。省去主语、宾语、助动词等。如： Thanks for the repair. Back at 8 p. m. Not milk today. Called round to see if you could come out tonight， but no one in. 不注重文字的推敲、句子的顺序，也不拘于写作形式。
二、请假条：1、要求:开门见山，内容简短，用词通俗2、写请假条的时间一般位于右上角。3、称呼写在日期下一行的左上角。一般以Dear开头。4、正文简洁明了。只需把请假的理由和请假时间说清楚即可。5、为说明请假事由是真实的，要在正文后另起一行写上：I enclose a doctor’s certificate. (我附上了医生证明。）6、署名写在右下角。名字上一行写上Yours，或Your student, 或Yours sincerely 等。
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　　My mom used to say that I was born to swim. But the truth is that I didn&t know how to swim until the last year of my primary school!
　　Mom always said that I could swim in the basin when I was only two months old. I was surprised at the amazing fact. If this was true, then why was I afraid of water? I went to swim every summer, but I didn&t make a little progress. I was worried and blamed myself several times. When I watched people swimming freely, how I wished I had learnt to swim!
　　The story of how I learnt to swim is dramatic. One hot summer afternoon, my father and I went to the swimming pool to swim. While my father was changing his clothes, I was roaming along the bank of the pool. Suddenly I heard a voice, &Look out!& and then came a big noise and beautiful splashes. Just when I was admiring the swimmer&s skills, I slipped into the pool! I was so afraid that I shouted at once! But the water kept coming towards me and I drank a lot of it. I was moving upside down and trying to reach the bank. I was struggling very hard to keep my head above the water.
　　A minute was like a hundred years to me. To my surprise, I was able to keep the style! Just then, my father, saw me and he seemed to be shocked. He then said, &Calm down, just wave your arms and legs like this. Right!& And I got it! I finally learnt to swim! You can&t imagine how happy I was and I wanted to jump for joy!
　　From this unforgettable experience I learnt that one&s power is unlimited. Sometimes you could show that power in an emergency. If you believe that, you will discover the power lying within yourself and achieve your goals. And one has to stay calm when it&s dangerous. To calm down helps you to think clearly and make the best decision for you. That&s what I have learnt from the experience.
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