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验证码输入错误，请重新输入写了一片作文有老师没得帮我修改一下_重庆66中吧_百度贴吧
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老师是属于躲在边边看帖不回叻～
楼上是老师我会乱说？
老师我看到了
看了还是要评价一哈吗
说明你语文没有学好个嘛
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为兴趣而生，贴吧更懂你。或哪位大仙帮我修改一下作文、.._英语吧_百度贴吧
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高中刚毕业...英语还行 但不知道四级的要求 ，请大家尽量指出我的问题、下面是我在家写的一篇文章 题目是 how should parents help children to be independant ?
It's not surprising that the child, viewed as the apple of the parents' eye, however, they seemed to fail to take into account the fact that it is their excessive love that makes their child's inability to confront the difficulties from life.
As far as I'm concerned, it is necessary for parents to provide love for their children in a right way. Firstly, children should be exposed to the real world, which is no shelter for them so that they can make it clear that life is filled with ups and downs. Additionally, parents should do as a leader to enlighten their child with advisable direction. Last but not least, parents' encouragement to them when they fail is the strength of the growth for children.And giving adequate assistance when necessary is more vital than too much love.
Indispensable as love is, you should aslo keep it in mind that too much love means nothing but unconsciously doing harm to the children.
标题己经错了。。。。
- - 它题目说就这个题目发表自己的看法啊...
you are kidding me~how should parents help children to be independant (independent)i know it's just a typo...you shall check your article again,too much mistake.
me too ,i should say too many
mistakes~~
you kedding me..?~~ - -
you should help me to Pick out the problem in my article ,please~~
independant 和 independent 一个英式 一个美式 ~~ 都是adj
晕。。。。有这个词的吗。。。。就算有也应放形容词不能是名词。这个词我觉得是错的，不过懒得查牛津了，我用灵格斯查不出这个词，另个网络释义是不一定正确的，只是参考，也就等于你放张图片，标上你个名，但上面的人可能是一个美女~~~the child（应用children，你不会认为这么多父母只有共享一孩子吧)viewed as the apple of the parents' eye：有点中式，我不知道西方有无这个说说，而且也写错了apple(s), (in) their parents' eye(s)......后面的。。。。
independant连度娘都搜不到
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