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大神带你精准踩中ACT考点（内附：ACT写作样题和满分样例）
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　　改版后的写作除了给你一个写作总分，还有四个大能力单项分。每个阅卷老师眼睛都很厉害，他们能够在短时间内快速找出考生写的这篇作文里的各大&采分点&，为了通关ACT写作考试，供大家考场上作战使用。
　　首先，开头首先简单明了的写清话题，以及这个话题所对应你的立场。要注意的是你的立场要体现你对这个controversial issue 的价值判断，保持中立态度都ok，但你不要摆一个fact。你必须让阅卷人立刻知道你论证主体部分要支持或反对的内容。同时，开头段不必使用各种高大上长难句，你可能最终没能让阅卷老师明白你的意思，反而让他觉得你逻辑混乱。
　　其次，由于新版ACT写作考试中题目中给的perspective1，2，3你必须全部进行回应，需要在草稿纸上写essay map进行brainstorming时要把这三个已给出的论点都考虑进去。对于和你立场一样的perspective，你只需把它拉到你方阵营，然后论证你的观点，立场不一样的perspective，一般有两种原因。第一，它可能和你讨论这个问题的角度不同，但是内容合理，你归纳一下你们都想说哪一大类的内容，然后你的论证角度是什么；第二，你可能根本不同意它表述的内容，那么你指出你哪不待见它即可，然后接着论证你的观点。建议大家在段首先写topic sentence，如果哪个perspective和你本段观点相似，提一两句。然后接着论证你的本段立场。或者先指出和你立场不一样的perspective，你不同意它哪了，然后本段你的立场又是什么，接着还是继续论证你的观点。最后在每段结尾加一个conclusion 进行总结或transition进行承上启下，重申一下你本段的立场，给阅卷老师留下一个你论证的严密的影响。毕竟是persuasive essay，写的越formal越好。平时的写作课建议同学们用2-3个段落作为论证的主体段落。
　　最后文章的最后一段，由于时间有限你只需给文章加个很简单的结尾，不求长篇大论只需再次重申一下这个问题你的立场，就是paraphrase 一下thesis statemen！ 希望大家都能取得一个好成绩！
　　附：官网给出的新版ACT写作样题和官网给出的满分例文
　　Intelligent Machines
　　Many of the goods and services we depend on daily are now supplied by intelligent， automated machines rather than human beings. Robots build cars and other goods on assembly lines， where once there were human workers. Many of our phone conversations are now conducted not with people but with sophisticated technologies. We can now buy goods at a variety of stores without the help of a human cashier. Automation is generally seen as a sign of progress， but what is lost when we replace humans with machines？ Given the accelerating variety and prevalence of intelligent machines， it is worth examining the implications and meaning of their presence in our lives.
　　Read and carefully consider these perspectives. Each suggests a particular way of thinking about the increasing presence of intelligent machines.
　　Perspective One Perspective Two Perspective Three
　　What we lose with the replacement of people by machines is some part of our own humanity. Even our mundane daily encounters no longer require from us basic courtesy， respect， and tolerance for other people. Machines are good at low-skill， repetitive jobs， and at high-speed， extremely precise jobs. In both cases they work better than humans. This efficiency leads to a more prosperous and progressive world for everyone. Intelligent machines challenge our long-standing ideas about what humans are or can be. This is good because it pushes both humans and machines toward new， unimagined possibilities.
　　Essay Task
　　Write a unified， coherent essay in which you evaluate multiple perspectives on the increasing presence of intelligent machines. In your essay， be sure to：
　　analyze and evaluate the perspectives given
　　state and develop your own perspective on the issue
　　explain the relationship between your perspective and those given
　　Your perspective may be in full agreement with any of the others， in partial agreement， or wholly different. Whatever the case， support your ideas with logical reasoning and detailed， persuasive examples.
　　官网满分例文：
　　As technology improves， and more and more tasks are completed by machines instead of humans， the question is no longer about what we can do with machines， but rather what we should. Although the usage of machines increases efficiency and our standard of living， it detracts from the value of human life.
　　As machines increasingly perform all our basic tasks， society is able to produce more. The additional production adds material value to our society and frees people up from these low-skill tasks. This is in agreement with Perspective Two which claims that this industrialization leads to more prosperity.// For example， in the 18th century， short-staple cotton that was grown in the Southern United States required an immense amount of labor in order to separate the seeds from the fiber to process the cotton to make it marketable. However， in the mid-19th century， Eli Whitney， an American entrepreneur， invented the cotton gin， which allowed for automation of cotton processing. This machine replaced the need of a large work force for the process and greatly improved production. As a result of the cotton gin， short-staple cotton production skyrocketed， increasing by more than 10 times in the South while bringing prosperity to the region and setting in motion a new industrial era in America. This is in agreement with Perspective Three， which says that mechanization allows for &unimagined possibilities&. Although there are clearly many advantages to industrialization， there are also some heavy drawbacks.
　　The replacement of humans by machines leads to the loss of value to human life， an effect that outweighs the material gains of automation. The search to find human tasks that can be performed by machines inevitably leads to comparisons between the human and the machine.// If a company executive wants to see if a inventory management team can be replaced by a robotic system， he will compare the two and determine which can do a better job. When this occurs， the people on the team are evaluated not for their worth as human beings， but for their effectiveness at performing a specific function&in essence， as we would evaluate a machine. In a larger sense， when we begin to think about humans in this way， the worth of a person&s life becomes dependent on only what they can do and no longer has any intrinsic value. As Perspective One states， we begin to lose our humanity. This new mindset and way of evaluating people， though seemingly harmless in the workplace， is devastating when it begins to pervade a society. If a person is judged only on his or her capability， there is no reason for a person to remain after they have served their function. This would warrant genocide against the elderly and the disabled because their burden on society would not be made up for by any production. Although the machines may seem to only fulfill the low skill jobs at the moment， there is no barrier to prevent the machines from replacing more. As the machines increase in intelligence， they will replace any tasks done by humans and render us unnecessary and worthless.
　　Due to the risks of dehumanization， the material benefits of machines are not enough to justify its increasing presence.
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大神汇总之ACT科学考试技巧
古语：&知己知彼，百战不殆&对于考试也是一样的，只有我们了解考试的大概内容，就明白我们要学习哪方面的知识，所以首先让我们先来了解一下ACT科学考试主要是考什么？在来了解ACT科学考试技巧。
ACT科学考试，实际就是我们中国的理化生考试，已推理的题目形式展开的，它的出题方式是比较灵活的，它主要是涉及的推理文章也是三类：数据分析（Data Representation）、研究摘要（Research Summaries）、观点冲突（Conflict Viewpoints）。
数据分析（Data Representation）
数据分析题考的是X线光谱学、血红蛋白与珠蛋白多肽、平行板形电容器。这类题目的时候我们直接看题目，同时理解文字内容，这样能节约时间。
研究摘要（Research Summaries）
研究摘要题考的是捕食者-被捕食者(举例古比鱼)、摆钟运动、210Pb和137Cs方法在河口研究中的应用。此类题目可以选择先看文字前面的介绍，确定实验目的。当碰到无法用数据解决问题的时候，马上看实验简介进行操作。
观点冲突（Conflict Viewpoints）
观点冲突题考的是乙酸和碳酸氢钠的实验。这类题目可以先看题干，在看的时候，我们要做好笔记，（注：学习时我们要有做笔记的习惯和技巧，以及有自己独特的记笔记的方式去记一些主要的东西。我们简称为速记）
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（1）审题；就是我们拿到试卷的时候用最快的速度去看后面的问题，带着问题去阅读试卷里面的文章内容；
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（3）图表分析：分析研究对象之间的关系，掌握科学的研究分析原则。以及分析你所要研究对象结果出现的差异一定是条件和造成的因素。（注：只有存在差异的条件才可能导致结果的不同;差异必然源于差异，但是差异不一定导致差异；）
（4）快速阅读&&依托英语阅读功底、带着之前看的问题快速扫读文章、寻找定位词、带回选项
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