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My Summer Vacation
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　　The Summer Vacation is coming . 　 　　I will have a happy holiday. On July 11th , I will go to Qingdao with my parents by bus . I think that Qingdao is a good place to take a vacation all the time . It's so beautiful . 　 　　I'll visit my friends on July 12th . We will play together . On July 13th , I will go swimming . And on July 14th , I will eat some special food such as hamburgers , hot dogs and another American food . On July 15th to 16th , I will visit some interesting places . On July 17th , I'll come back from Qingdao . 　 　　Of course , I won't forget to do my homework . What a happy holiday !
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&&&&& My summer vacation was very boring.Because I had to go to ABC school.It was so tired.
&&&&& But,I was go to the Ba Shang last Friday with my parents.
&&&&& It was a beautiful day,the sun was shining.There was no cloud in the sky,Flower came out.The first day,we only drove the car.And&check in hotel.
&&&&&&Next day,we went to the grassland.The grass was so green.We would watch the horse racing.I was very exciting.
&&&&&&Horses very fast,they were eyeball over.And ,people were clap.
&&&&&&The game over.
&&&&& We went to&hotel,we must had a break&.Well,in the aftermoon,we would ride horse.
&&&&&& Oh year!
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My summer vacation was very boring.Because I had to go to ABC school.It was so tired.
But,I was go to the Ba Shang last Friday with my parents.
It was a beautiful day,the sun was shining.There was no cloud in the sky,Flower came out.The first day,we only drove the car.And check in hotel.
Next day,we went to the grassland.The grass was so green.We would watch the horse racing.I was very exciting.
Horses very fast,they were eyeball over.And ,people were clap.
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