悬赏：跪求帮我修改一下英语作文万能段落段落,主...

来源：蜘蛛抓取(WebSpider) 时间：2011-10-23 18:06 标签： 英语作文段落格式
　　　　　　　　　　想把客厅改到和南向，和阳台相连，希望隔出一间有窗户的独立书房。图上除洗手间和厨房的墙之外都可以移动
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　　现有一个儿子，打算以后再带一个女儿，想给他们每人一间房子，自己喜欢看书，想要一间独立的书房，不知怎样去改户型，哪位大神给个建议，谢谢
　　现在客厅位置有一个1.75米宽的窗户
　　入户门在哪，窗在哪
　　还是发一下 建商给的原始户型吧，你这图 看不懂
　　　　入户门在图片右边
　　　　画有双实线的是窗户
　　自己顶一下
　　把现在很小的那个客房做成一全透明工作间，原书房做卧室
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帮我修改一下英语作文,主题是第一句.问题是议论文.Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspirations.This sentences give we a message,god only give we a little.If you want success,we must do many.Another face,the one percent inspiration is also important.The opinion is also mine.One person sit on his home,the money don’t go to his pocket.We must go to work.First,we should have ninety-nine percent perspirations.But you only have it,you will be failed.You must have inspiration.Only a little,you will have a better change.
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Oh,my god.Your essay's structure is so messy.Why do you only have two paragraphs?I am now in Australia.Our standard is five paragraph.First paragraph is instruction,then two argue for and one argue against.Finally,you should put a conclusion.Oh,my god,I do not have the ability to correct your essay.I suggest you that you'd better re-write one in the structure that I mentioned before.Otherwise,the score of your essay in my view is zero!God!
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