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高考作文“跪求零分”未能如愿 阅卷老师给1分
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　　通篇空白，只在标题上写了四个字“跪求零分”，得一分；试卷当成了画稿，写下题目之后，画了一个类似于QQ表情的哭脸，通篇再无一字，得两分！这些看似奇葩的作文，都是出自今年江苏高考生之手，让阅卷老师相当无奈。不过总体来说，今年作文整体水平比去年高，估计均分在47分左右，比去年提高2分左右。满分作文比去年多，有生活气息的文章受到肯定。而赵薇的电影《致我们终将逝去的青春》出现频率太高，以致一位阅卷老师就改了几百篇《致青春》“剧情简介”，他对现代快报记者直言，有一种想吐的感觉。现代快报记者 金凤 黄艳
　　雷人指数★★★★★
　　“跪求零分”，因为有题目还得了一分
　　有阅卷老师说，自己改到不止一篇的零分作文，那就是通篇一字没写的。但让人惊奇的是，有阅卷老师表示，今年的高考作文出现了“跪求零分”的作文。高考中，在密集分数段，一分就相差两三千人，考生们恨不得“分分计较”，怎么还会有考生“跪求零分”呢？
　　有阅卷老师表示，在批阅的几篇作文中，有的学生通篇空白，只在标题上写了四个字“跪求零分”，“只要写了题目，还是会给分的。”最终，这位考生得了1分。
　　还有的学生又把试卷当成了画稿，写下题目之后，画了一个类似于QQ表情的哭脸，通篇再无一字。这篇作文也毫无例外地成了非主流，只得到2分。
　　除了这些放弃作文的考生，也有考生因为审题不清，分数被判不及格，在42分以下。“有些考生把材料中的‘天真’、‘自欺欺人’作为作文的主题发挥，这显然是断章取义了，所以只能按偏题处理，在及格线以下。但是，虽然偏题，但整篇作文论证完整，只是对主题的理解有误，所以也能得30多分。”
　　也有考生以“信念”为题，虽然也属偏题，但与“青春”和“不朽”相对接近，偏题不算严重，所以分数稍微高一些，一般在40、41分。
　　相似指数★★★★★
　　看《致青春》“剧情简介”，老师想吐
　　赵薇导演的电影《致我们终将逝去的青春》，青春主题的确和今年的作文有一定相关。但若是这成了今年高考作文中很多人选择的素材，那会是一种怎样的后果呢？让阅卷老师来回答，那就是看了很多遍，看到想吐。
　　一位阅卷老师说，他改了好几百篇作文，都是把《致青春》的故事先讲一遍，他看了几百遍同样的故事，感觉特别难受。“也有换各种方式用《致青春》的，但都用得不太好，总围绕着故事情节。”
　　不仅《致青春》用的人多，还有各种大家能想到的流行人物的励志故事，也都是被大量考生使用，比如马云的故事。
　　“在这么多相似的作文中，我改到最后一天，才碰到一篇很喜欢的文章。”他说，这位考生说自己是闲人，要把心放下来观察自然。“现在年轻人能有这种心态不容易。”这位老师给文风清新、流露真情实感的这篇文章打了极高的分。
　　满意指数★★★★★
　　记录父母青春得满分
　　什么样的作文才能得满分或高分？今年满分作文比较多，阅卷老师说，普遍性的特点就是，生活气息浓郁，能从一些小故事、生活中的小场景入手，以小见大，描写生动细腻。比如，有一篇满分作文，考生写的是父母不老的青春，就避开了众多就青春说青春的俗套题材。考生采用欲扬先抑的手法，从搬家中老爸老妈的疲惫的动作和神态入手，点明爸妈都老了。随后，话锋一转，当老爸老妈捧起一本年轻时的教程，眸子瞬间亮了一下，年轻时青春似火的记忆和当时的热门话题再次打开记忆的闸门。传神之处在于，老爸摩挲着泛黄的书页，高声朗诵年轻时摘录的诗词时的意气风发和老妈聆听时幸福的表情，被描写得惟妙惟肖。于是，主题突显，他老爸老妈心中的火还没熄灭，他们从未被生活磨平。阅卷老师表示，这篇作文构思精巧，描写精妙，紧扣材料主旨，语言不着痕迹，表现力强。
　　而议论文中的高分作文则胜在“反弹琵琶”，例如，有考生通过古今中外不少名人志士的传奇经历得出结论：生命的不朽，不在于青春永驻，而在于价值的实现。
　　采访中，多位阅卷老师表示，今年作文题目很容易写成就青春说青春的俗套题材，也有不少考生停留在空洞说教的理论层面。
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对比观点题型（1） 要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。1． 有一些人认为...2． 另一些人认为...3． 我的看法...The topic of ①-----------------（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------（支持A的理由一）What is more, ③-------------理由二). Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥------------------（理由二）. Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三).From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------（我的观点）. The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .（2） 给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点Some people believe that ①----------------（观点一）. For example, they think ②-----------------（举例说明）．And it will bring them ③-----------------(为他们带来的好处).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,④-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一). For another thing, ⑤-----------------(反对的理由之二)．　　　　 Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥------------------(我对文章所讨论主题的看法)．阐述主题题型要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述．1． 阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义．2． 分析并举例使其更充实．The good old proverb ----------------（名言或谚语）reminds us that ----------------(释义). Indeed, we can learn many things form it.First of all,-----------------(理由一). For example, -------------------(举例说明). Secondly,----------------(理由二). Another case is that ---------------(举例说明). Furthermore , ------------------(理由三)．In my opinion, ----------------(我的观点). In short, whatever you do, please remember the say------A. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you”ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.解决方法题型要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径1． 问题现状2． 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)　　　 In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(说明A的现状)．Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状)　　　　 Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ---------------(解决方法一). For another -------------(解决方法二). Finally, --------------(解决方法三).Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解决方法). Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because --------------(带来的好处).说明利弊题型这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度（利或弊）出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度（或对事物前景提出预测）1． 说明事物现状2． 事物本身的优缺点（或一方面）3． 你对现状（或前景）的看法Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First ----------------(A的优点之一). Besides -------------------（A的优点之二）.But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ----------------(A的第一个缺点)．To make matters worse,------------------(A的第二个缺点)．Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法)．(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, ---------------(对前景的预测)．)议论文的框架　　(1) 不同观点列举型（选择型）　There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _ 观点一________. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____. So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____.　　 People,　however,　differ　in　their　opinions　on　this　matter.　Some　people　 hold the idea that ___观点二_______. In their point of view, on the one hand， ___原因一_______. On the other hand, ____原因二_____. Therefore, there　is no　doubt　that ___观点二______.　　As far as I am concerned, I　firmly　support　the　view　that __观点一或二______.　It　is not only because ________, but also because _________. The more _______, the more ________.（2）利弊型的议论文Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)___作文题目______. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____. Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, ___优点一______. And secondly ___优点二_____.Just As a popular saying goes, \&every coin has two sides\&, __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, ___缺点一______. In addition, ____缺点二______.To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.( 3 ) 答题性议论文Currently, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)__作文题目_______ .It is really an important concern to every one of us. As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem. First of all, __途径一______. In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途径二_____.Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文题目______, we should find a number of various ways. 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