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collection/descriptionjournalistic writing
styleWwho, what, where, when and
This morning, walking on the street, I met two strangers who were
studying a map. They looking worried, I realized that they must
have been lost, so I asked them what I could help them with. They
told me that they would go to the Temple of Heaven. Then I
led them to the nearby bus stop and told them a No. 20 bus could
take them right there. Soon afterwards, the bus arrived.
Not until they got on the bus did I wave goodbye to them and
left. I was so glad that I could help others.
shortly after, ever since, at the same time, before long,
first, secondon the left, in the middle/center of,
at the foot/top/end of, on the other side of, to the left/right
cause/effect2012
High school students are faced with a
choice between arts and science. Most students make their final
decision, depending on their hobbies and interests, weaknesses and
strengths, and future goals. Having taken everything into
consideration, I made my final decision to be an arts
There are some reasons accounting for my
choice. First, arts lessons, full of famous
people and events, are extremely interesting and enjoyable while
abstract concepts and calculation in science lessons are very
boring. Second, the choice of arts can help me achieve my childhood
dream of becoming a lawyer or translator. Third, I am better at
arts than science, which will enable me to perform well in college
entrance exams and get admitted to my dream university.
problem /solution2011I
…I’m LiHua, a Chinese student taking
summer courses in your university. I’m writing to ask for
help. I came here last month and& found my courses
interesting. But I have some difficulties with note-taking
and I have no idea of how to use the library. I was told the
Learning Center provides help for students and I’m anxious to
get help from you. I have no class on Tuesday mornings and
Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is OK with you.
whether201211
Recently our class had a discussion about
whether we should help strangers. Opinions are divided on
this topic.
Some think we should try to help others whether
they are strangers or not. Helping others is a virtue, and it will make our society
more harmonious. Besides, to some extent, helping others is helping
oneself. We may come across some trouble and need others' help some
However, others disagree. They are afraid that helping others can sometimes bring us
trouble or even put us in danger. Sometimes we are just
misunderstood and are trapped in big trouble.&&&&&&&&
In my opinion, we should learn to protect ourselves while lending a hand
to those in need. Only if everyone tries a little kindness, will
society be full of love and trust be established between
Happy Teens
Q1: Did they understand basketball is a tough game
where pushing and bumping are very common?
Q2: Did they care too much about winning and
Q3: Were they too self-centered? Were they
considerate enough?
Q4: Were they calm enough when the conflict
Q5: Did they handle the conflict wisely after it
The conflict arose from the following factors. First, they
didn’t understand basketball is a tough game where pushing and
bumping are very common. Second, they cared too much about winning
and losing. Third, they were too self-centered and not considerate
enough. Fourth, they were not calm enough to handle the conflict in
a wise way when the conflict happened.
“”Your future depends on many things,
but mostly on you
Q1: What is your future about?
( to reach a
to make great contributions to society,
Q2. Your future is affected by many factors. What
(They include great help from other, good
opportunities, in- good education,
Q3: Of all the factors, which one is the most
important? And why?
(The most important one is our hard work, strong
determination, perseverance, positive attitude, etc.)
Can we achieve great success in the future? Well,
it is determined by many things, such as great help from other,
good opportunities, in-born talent, a good health, good education.
However, of all these factors, our strong determination, , positive
attitude hard work play a more important role in realizing our
Last Sunday, I went sightseeing with
my friends in the Fairy Lake Park. The park was full of freshness
and beauty of spring, with the sun shining and birds singing. When
I was enjoying the fantastic scenery around, something unpleasant
caught my eye. A young couple in a boat were eating, talking and
laughing loudly as if they were the only people in the world.
What's worse, they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake,
totally ignoring the noticeable sign "No Littering" nearby. What a
⑵Such behavior left me deep in
thought. If all visitors to the Fairy Lake Park do as the couple
did, the lake will be severely polluted and soon turned into a huge
⑶“”Authorities should step up
supervision to ensure the park is tidy and clean. All the visitors
in the park should mind our behavior in public places. As a
student, I can do my bit to raise people’s awareness of protecting
the parks. Only in this way can we live in more comfortable and
beautiful surroundings.
Q1: The film was delayed. How did the audience
react to it?
Q2. What harm did the loud sound of the film cause
to the audience?
Q3. The exit is not clear enough. What would
happen if there was a fire?
1.Because of too many ads at the beginning, the
film was delayed, which made the audience impatient and even
2.The sound of the film was very loud, which
made the audience feel uncomfortable and could even cause damage to
their hearing.
3.The exit is not clear enough. There is
potential danger. If there was a fire, the audience would have
troulbe finding the way out.
Q1: American students will have a talk with
Chinese students. What’s its purpose?
Q2. American students will have lunch in the
school canteen. What Chinese traditional food will be
Q3: In the afternoon, American students will visit
the Haihe River. What can the students in Tianjin tell about the
1. In order to have a better understanding of
each other, we’ll have a talk in the morning.
2. We will have lunch together in the school
dining hall, where the traditional Chinese food such as jiaozi
will be served.
3. In the afternoon, we will visit the Haihe
River, which is the seventh longest river in China with
fantastic scenery.
We should learn to achieve a balance between work
and rest. Just as a saying goes, all work and no play makes Jack
a dull boy.
You cannot choose what you are given, but you can choose
how you make use of it.
When you’re in a bad situation, don’t be
discouraged. Instead, stay positive and turn it into a stepping
stone to success. Just as a saying goes, life is like playing
cards. you can't control the cards you're dealt, just how you play
“”“Your future depends on many things,
but mostly on you”
Our future is determined by many things, such as
opportunities and help form others, but our own attitude,
determination and hard work play a more role. We’re the master
of our own future. Just as a saying goes, God helps those who help
themselves.
Jeremy Lin150
Some people think he is successful because of his
hard work. Some people consider his talent as a main factor of his
success. It’s also believed that the good education he has received
lead to his success. But some people argue that he has achieved
success just because he is lucky.
⒈ 89
…①We’re throwing a surprise party for
Xiaoming’s birthday. ②We’d like to invite you to the
party. ③We want to give him a surprise, so please keep quiet
about it. We’ll gather at the Students’ Club at 8 p.m. this
Friday, after the evening classes. And it’s going to last about an
hour. ④We each will prepare a little present. When he comes,
we’ll light the candles and sing “Happy Birthday” together for him.
⑤Then we will cut the cake and we’ll sing songs and play
games. ⑥We will be glad to see how excited he will
be. I’m sure you’ll have a good time at the party,
①A surprise party will be thrown for Xiaoming’s
②It’s our great honour to invite you to the
③In order to give him a surprise, everyone should
keep quiet about it.
④A little present will be prepared.
⑤The cake will be cut.
⑥It’s nice to see how excited he will
Hope you will have a good time at the party,
1. The economy is developing fast, and more and
more people can afford private cars.2012
2. We shouldn’t blame each other. We should
communicate more and put ourselves in others’
shoes.2012
1. With the rapid development of economy,
more and more people can afford private cars.
2.Instead of blaming each other, we should
communicate more and put ourselves in others’
shoes.2012
beautifulfantastic, unique, superb, awesome,
spectacular, impressive, marvelous, breathtaking, splendid,
gorgeous, amazing
I (strongly) suggest that
I (firmly) believe that
I (sincerely) hope that
I (fully) support that
as is (vividly) shown in the
have (a profound) effect
make a (big) difference to
take (effective) measures
play a (vital) role in
&I say what I mean and I mean what I
”If you want to achieve great success
in life, sometimes you need to face challenges and even take
“”Five Talks Four Beauties Three
LoveThe school held a campaign to improve
the students’ moral standards.
What’s a UFO?
Q1: Is it a person or an object?
Q2: Where does it come from?
Q3: Can it fly?
Q4: Do we know much about it?
Thomas S.C. Farrell, Planning lessons for
a Reading Class,2007.
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基础写作。
&&&&假如你是校园小记者，请根据以下所提供的信息，写一篇我校“读书节之校园书展”的简要报道。&&& 时间：日下午5点至7点&&& 地点：学校文化大厅&&& 活动主题：第一届读书节系列活动之校园书展&&& 活动内容：校园精品图书新书展、旧书交易、旧书拍卖、图书捐赠&&& 活动目的：以最优惠的价格为同学们提供最优秀的图书，并提倡循环利用、节能环保的理念&&&&活动概况：本次活动高一高二同学积极投入，活动圆满成功。 &&& [写作内容] &&& 根据以上情况写一篇报道，并包括如下内容：本次活动的时间、地点、主题、内容、目的和活动&&&&概况。 &&& [参考词汇]文化大厅 Culture Hall 精品图书 selected books 拍卖 auction &&& [写作要求] 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。 &&& [评分标准] 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。 &&& _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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&&& From 5 P.M to 7 P.M on the 12th of October, 2010, a book exhibition was held in our school Culture Hall. It was part of the series of activities for the Book Festival this year. During the exhibition, various sections were included, like the exhibition of selected new books, second-hand book trades, auctions of old books, and the book donation activities. This event aims to provide students with the best books at the lowest price and promote the idea of recycling and environmental protection. With the active participation of the students from Senior 1 and 2, the event achieved huge success. 答案不唯一
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因为篇幅有限，只列出部分考点，详细请访问。
提纲作文的概念：
提纲作文就是把文章的情景和内容要求分成块，以条目的形式列出以进行写作。提纲作文写作要领：
第一步：审题： 审题是否清楚是一篇书面表达成功与否的关键所在，在整个写作过程中起着决定性作用。审好题会让我们做到“磨刀不误砍柴工”，审题时要做到以下几点： （1）审要求：书面表达试题一般都由“情景”和“要求”两部分构成。“情景”中包括所写材料的目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等，一般在书面表达题的前半部分；而“要求”一般在书面表达的后半部分，以“注意”形式给出，实际上是对考生提出的要求。因而考生对于题目所提供的说明，应认真分析、反复推敲，搞清提出的内容要求，抓住所要表达的信息点。 （2）审文体：高考书面表达的体裁一般有三大类：记叙文、说明文和应用文，具体形式有便条，日记，通知，书信，人物、事情、情景故事的描写，看图说话，缩写，扩写，改写等。审题时要审清文体，注意格式上的不同，避免出错。 （3）审人称：审查书面表达题干中隐含的读者对象和撰写人，即搞清楚此篇文章是“由谁写给谁”的。写稿人是谁一般都已明确指出，给出形式假设环境中的“某人”，如“假设你是李华”，写作时即用第一人称“我”，即李华。而读者对象有时没有明示，要考生自己去进行判断。 （4）审时态：根据情景判断短文需要的主体时态，即搞清楚要写的是什么时候的事，过去的就用过去时。比如日记，是叙述过去发生的事情，自然用过去时；通知多用将来时。 第二步：抓中心，列要点，列出写作提纲： 写作文时，一定要切题，抓住中心，紧扣要点。不要任意发挥，画蛇添足，也不要丢三落四，要点不全。通过对众多提示或图画、图表的观察和分析，获取与写作内容有关的主要信息，并按一定的逻辑顺序排列起来，找出最密切相关的要点，列出写作提纲。 第三步：选词组句：在体裁明确、中心突出、要点清晰的前提下，应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型，将要点逐条表达出来。表达时应该综合运用所掌握的知识，避开生僻的词汇，并克服母语的干扰，按照英语的习惯方式，用地道的英语表达出来，力求做到语言准确无误。 第四步：连句成篇：根据要点选词组句，然后按照篇章结构连句成篇。在这一过程中要注意选择恰当的表示并列、递进、因果或转折意义的过渡词，把所有要点、句子连接起来，使句与句意思连贯，结构衔接，力求准确生动、条理清楚。 第五步：复查纠错： 通读全文，检查内容是否符合要求，要点是否齐全，格式是否正确，词数是否合乎要求。最主要的是要检查句子是否符合英语习惯，句型是否正确，语法是否正确（包括句子结构、时态、语态、主谓一致等），检查单词是否误写、少写，习语搭配是否得当等，以及字母大小写、标点符号是否正确等，这就要求考生在定稿认真检查，仔细核对，及时发现并改正问题，保证要点齐全，句子完整通顺，力争减少失误。 第六步：书写规范，卷面整洁：书面表达不仅反映在表达内容上，也反映在书面形式上。一定要注意单词拼写正确，书写规范，字迹工整，卷面力求整洁，正确使用标点符号，使别人看起来耳目一新，具有整体美感，从而提高自己的得分档次。
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368334426660181507180858203889427230以“我的学校生活”为题写一篇英语小作文
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四、五句话就好
i wake up every morning at 6:30. start my breakfast at 6:45 and then go to school. school starts at 7:30. i have( ) classes in the morning. lunch time starts at ( ). we have ( ) minutes for lunch break. for afternoon we have ( ) classes. school ends at ( ). i go home by (bus, walk, bike, car). when i arrive home i start doing my homework at ( ). then i eat my dinner with my family at( ). after dinner i continue on my homework. i take a shower after i've finished my homework at ( ). then i go to bed at ( ). this is my day. 括号里的是详细时间和数据需要你填.
四五句话就好
我在每天早晨起床，在六点四十五开始吃早餐，然后去学校。学校开课在七点半。在早晨我上（）课。在（）点开始时间。我花（）分钟在午饭上。在下午我有（）课。上学结束在（）点。我乘（）回家。当我到家我在（）点开始做我的作业。然后我在（）点和我的父母吃晚饭。晚饭后我继续做我的作业。在（）点完成作业后我洗了个澡。然后在（）点我上床睡觉。这是我的一天。
这是从网上找的原文，只是发现有些地方不妥，等等我帮你写写吧。
&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&& My school life
This is&a busy day.In the morning,l start& to accept assignments as a English leader.Then I have morning study hall at 7:30 and I have to take notes.Sometimes I need to see friends` notes because My teacher take so fast.During the break,I must review and I should prepare,but sometimes no time because teachers have something,for example,lookfor soineoIle\Corrects students' papers,they&&seem to be very busy.So a day,When I lied in bed,I was very&tired but so happy.
这是忙碌的一天。早晨，作为英语组长我开始收作业。然后我在七点半上早自习并且我不得不记笔记。有时候我需要看朋友们的笔记，因为我的老师讲得太快了。在课间，我必须复习并且应该预习，但有时因为老师有事而没时间，例如，找人、批改作业，他们似乎都很忙。就这样过了一天。当我躺在床上，我非常累但很开心。
用四、五句话重新写一篇，外加翻译！谢了！
&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&& 我的(My School life)
Hello, everyone! I'm (). Today, I'll tell you more about my school life. My school starts in September and lasts until the middle of June. Then we have a long summer vacation until the next September.
嗨,大家好!我是()。今天,我要告诉你一些关于我的学校生活。我的学校从9月份开始上课,一直持续到六月中旬。然后我们有一个长的暑假,直到明年九月。
&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&& 我的学校生活(My School life)
When I was six years old, I began to go to school. The first school (which) I attended was a primary school. There were many subjects (which were taught in the school, such as Chinese, arithmetic, history, geography, drawing and so forth. Since I was (became) a student, I studied very hard. My parents were quite proud of me. After I had studied there for three years, I entered a junior high school. When I was twelve years old, I became a student of a senior high school. I still studied very hard. Except on sick leave I was never absent from class. Everybody looked upon me as a model student.
我六岁的时候，就开始上学了。我第一个上的学校是一所国小。学校里教的有许多，诸如，，史地，画图等等。既然我是一个学生，我就用功读书。我父母深以我为荣。我在那边读了三年后，就进入初中。我十二岁的时候，就成为一个高中的。我依旧用功读书。除病假外，我永不缺课。人人都把我看作是一个模范生。
第二遍还是有点多，不过可以截取一部分，捡重要的。（应该可以了吧？）
能不能写一些之类的？还要六年级水平？拜托，谢谢！
经过上午三节课，我很累了，躺在宿舍的床上快要睡去之时，门外却响起了敲门声，开门一看，原来是我临班的朋友，她总是趁中午之际跑到我这问一很难的问题，有时候老师也不会。
After three classes in the morning, I was very tired, lying on the bed to sleep dormitory to the outside, but a knock on the door open, I see, is the friend, she is always at midday naps while running to me that asks a lot of difficult problems, sometimes the teacher won't.
啊！我实在是没什么，除了学习还是学习，如果还不行就请写一下你的课余生活，我来翻译吧。。。
我是()学校的一名学生.我每天早上()时上课. (帮忙翻译这两个句子,谢谢了,麻烦你这么多次)
I am a （）school’s student.I have classes at ()every day.
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外语领域专家写一篇英语作文，详情看问题补充，急啊，中午就要。。_百度知道
写一篇英语作文，详情看问题补充，急啊，中午就要。。
假如你是Kathy，你们班这学期来了一位新的英语老师Miss Wang, 想了解一下你们初一初二学英语的情况。请根据表格内容写一封email给Miss Wang, 来阐述 你自己以前的学习方法，并提出你对初三英语学习的新方法(至少3点)。the best ways to learn Englishin the past now1. memorize the words and the articles 1…2.study grammar and take grammar notes 2…
Dear Miss Wang,
I'm Kathy. I used to be short and shy when I was in Grade Seven. Now I am taller and outgoing. I was weak in English in Grade Seven , but now I am good at English because I have good ways of learning English and I study harder and harder. I often get up early and
memorize the words and the articles for more than ten minutes in the morning. I aiso study grammar and take grammar notes every day.
I like listening to English programs and watch English movies. When I have problems in English, I often ask my teacher and classmates for help. I try as hard as possilbe in English learning so I can get good grades now.
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Dear Miss Wang,
IM your student Kathy.My English so hard to learn.
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