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Anyway, we can play and have fun in the swimming pool. Also. I think swimming is a very interesting sport, we can call several friends to swim together, too. Besides. And it makes us cool in the hot summer days. It helps us build a healthy body. I like swimming. Swimming is popular, the weather is very hot游泳Swimming 　　　In summer, swimming is a joyful activity in the hot summer
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关于游泳的英语作文：Learn Swimming
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Yesterday is Sunday. The day's weather is so hot. This afternoon, I went to the swimming pool with my father and my brother.
I put up the swimming suit.When I saw the people who is swimming,I wanted to swim very much . So I made up my mind to learn swimming today!
At first, I could not swim at all. My father was very patient. He He encouraged me and taught me how to swim.Though I was hard to swim ,I didn't give up learning swimming ! My father taught me how to breath in the water first. Then , He threw me into the deepest part of the swimming pool . That time I was so afraid ! I tried and tried to swim .After a moment , my father take me back . Three hours later,with the help of my father, I dared to swim myself. I could swim by myself. Although I couldn't swim very well, I was very happy.
Yesterday I not only learned how to swim , but also learned to be brave !
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场景描写:在海里游泳
　　在海里游泳
　　【内容提示】
　　炎热的夏天，你去青岛旅行。一天下午，你去海滨避暑，第一次在海水里游泳。看到大浪，听到涛声，起初你有些害怕。但当看见一个弱小的男孩向大海游去时，你感到害臊。受到小男孩的鼓舞，你向前游去，经受了狂涛大浪的洗礼。
　　【作文示范】
　　Swimming in the Sea
　　It was in hot summer that I took a trip to Qingdao, a port city in Shandong Province, One afternoon, I decided to go to the seaside to get relief ① from the heat. For the first time in my life, I swam in the sea.
　　At first, I was worried because though I was not a bad swimmer in the swimming pool, the sea was different. The waves coming one after another to the shore made a great noise and I thought they were going to swallow me up. I was terrified. Cautiously ② and slowly, I went close to the water. How cold it was! I was just about to give it up when I suddenly caught sight of a small boy who was about a head shorter than me. Weak as he seemed, he went straight into the sea without hesitation. I felt a little ashamed.&What a timid ③ girl I am!&I said to myself.
　　Encouraged by his bravery ④, I continued advancing. Soon all of my body was covered by water. Before I got ready for a dive, a wave came over. It struck my face heavily and the water went into my eyes, nose and mouth. How bitter and salty it tasted! But I was not discouraged at all. I wiped off the water on my face, took a deep breath, and began swimming happily.
　　The waves became larger and larger, as if the sea was angry with me. When I saw a wave in the distance, I would hold my breath, and just before it came to where I was, I jumped up and easily kept myself from it. How exciting! I was just like lying on the clouds!
　　All that afternoon, I swam and jumped and had a very good time. When finally I had to leave, I took a last look at the sea. The waves were still beating the shore, but I was no longer frightened. &I must thank that little boy,&I said to myself.&It was he who gave me the courage.&
　　【词语解释】
　　①relief n. 减轻;解除
　　②cautiously ad. 谨慎地;细心地
　　③timid a. 胆怯的;缺乏自信心的
　　④bravery n. 勇敢;大胆
　　【写法指要】
　　1)本文作者写了她第一次在海里游泳的情况。但是，她主要不是叙述自己如何游泳，而是描写她由胆怯到勇敢，甚至敢于与惊涛骇浪争高下的转变过程。
　　2)作者在文中使用了拟人和明喻两种修辞格：前者如&&swallow me up&.&和&&as if the sea was angry with me&.&，后者如&It was just like lying on the clouds.&。此外，有些句型如&& be just about to do&when&.&，&Weak as he seemed&.&用得很好，值得借鉴。
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keen on swimming, because I find it’s so cool and relaxing. In summer days, it's
always very hot. We can’t do any sports but swim. While swimming, I can
entertain myself. I began to learn swimming when I was eight years old. I was a
quick learner. After three weeks learning, I could swim very well. So I often
went swimming with my friends in my free time. But now I'm tired of swimming
pools. I dream of swimming in the sea.
我喜欢游泳，因为我觉得游泳很酷也很让人放松。夏天总是很热。&除了游泳我们不能做别的运动。在游泳时，我可以自我娱乐。我八岁时开始学游泳。我学得很快。经过三周的学习，我就可以游得很好了。所以在我的空闲时间里我经常和我的朋友去游泳。但现在我厌倦了游泳池。我想在海里游泳。
I'm in Zhuhai, I will go swimming in the sea every day. After swimming, I will
lie on the golden beach and enjoy the beautiful sunshine. Sometimes I will also
pick up some sea shells or feel the sea wind. It must be amusing.
如果我在珠海，我每天都会去海里游泳。游泳后我会躺在金黄色的海滩上，享受美丽的阳光。有时候我也会捡一些海鲜贝壳，或者吹吹海风。肯定很有趣。
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