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英语作文修改~求高手指出语法和结构上的错误（有加分）I think the most valuable personal quality of a university student is passion.Passion can not only help the university students keep a good momentum of studying the expertise,but also stimulate them to involve all-round knowledge.Just as our English translation major students,the only English language skills are far insufficient for us to be a qualified translator.We also need to get in touch with various aspects.So passion is the resource for university students to learn willingly and joyfully.Of course,studying is essential for university students but not the whole.A university student is demanded to be much mature in the ways dealing with things.And how to cultivate this ability The answer is experience.University students should try their best to rich their experience----taking part in school activities,discussing with professors,doing part-time jobs and so on.To do all these things well,passion is the inevitably factor to success.
In my opinion,the most valuable personal quality of a university student is passion,which can not only help him keep up a good momentum of studying the expertise,but also stimulate him to be involved in the gaining of all-round knowledge.As FOR English translation major students,English language skills ALONE are far FROM ENOUGH .We also need to get in touch with KNOWLEDGE OF various OTHER FIELDS.So passion is WHERE university students to learn willingly and joyfully.Of course,studying is essential for university students but IT IS not ALL .A university student is SUPPOSED to be QUITE mature WHEN IT COMES TO the ways OF dealing with SUBJECT MATTERS .BUT how CAN WE cultivate this ability The answer LIES IN ONE'S experience.University students should try their best to ENrich their experience AND KNOWLEDGE LIKE taking part in school activities,discussing with professors,doing part-time jobs and so on.To do all these things well,UNIVERSITY STUDENTS MUST POSSESS passion ,WHICH is inevitably THE KEY factor to success.
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personal quality---->personality university student---->college student我擦，一看下面错的太多了，没法改，重新写一篇吧这么恐怖！别打击我啊~~
老师给的topic sentence就是I think the most valuable personal quality of a university stu...
你们老师高中的？
重新写一篇吧
改错如下：Just as
major in English translationA university student is demanded to be much mature in the way of dealing things.the key factor to success?inevitably, is passion .
I think the most valuable personal quality of a university student is passion. Passion can not only help
university students to
keep a good momentum of studying the expertise, but also stimulate the...
help sb with sth=help sb to do sth
文章写的不错，可以上交了。
要不再改改，和pal一起答。。。
貌似我这要求过分了。。
I believe that the most precious trait of university students is passion. Thanks a lot to their passion, university students not only spare no effort to master their majors, but also participate in ac...
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高中英语作文中常出现的十大语法错误
高中生在英语学习中或多或少都会存在错误，尤其是在英语作文写作中，语法错误不可避免，为此，本文对高中生英语写作中语法错误进行了分析研究。
语法错误具体分类如下：
1. 主谓关系中人称和数量不一致性（person/number agreement）错误
由于汉语的动词不受主语的人称和数的影响，英语的谓语动词要和主语保持一致，谓语动词要随着主语而变化。而学生主要用汉语思维，因此他们往往没有习惯去考虑主语是第几人称，是单数还是复数。例如：
a. A number of students is going to learn a foreign language.
b. He go to school by bike every day.
a句中a number of +复数名词做主语时，其谓语动词用复数形式。b中 He是第三人称单数，在一般现在时态中谓语动词go应该加es.
2.时态（Tense）
高中生在写作中经常在时态方面犯错误。英语时态种类繁多，动词的构成形式随着时态的变化而变化。中文里没有时态区分。动作或动词的时间由跟在动词后的诸如 “着”、“了”、“过”等副词小词来表示，对高中生来说，掌握英语的时态不是很容易。实际上，学习者在头脑里很清楚语法规则，但经常混淆或忘记改变动词的词形。例如：
a. A baby can cry as soon as it was born.
b. I spend 50 yuan buying the clothes.
c. I will not come here if it will rain tomorrow.
正确的句子：
a. A baby can cry as soon as it is born.
b. I spent 50 yuan buying the clothes.
c. I will not come here if it rains tomorrow.
分析：第一句是一个常识问题，应该用一般现在时态。第二句“我买这件衣服花了50元”应该是过去时态。第三句主句是一般将来时，从句是一般现在时态。
3.语态错误
动词的被动式在英语中比比皆是，学生由于汉语思维的影响，很少考虑到用被动语态（Passive Voice）。虽然中文里也有被动式的含义，但与英语里被动式表达方式完全不同。英语里的被动式要求有助动词be和一个变异的过去分词形式，其中这个助动词带有时态和人称数量信息，中文里需要使用诸如“被”、“使”、“让”等词语，不需要有不规则的动词形式。这对中国的学习者来说就有潜在的困难。例如：
a. New bicycles must keep inside.
b. The book has to return at the end of the week.
c. The food has cooked.
d. Knife should take away from babies.
正确的句子：
a. New bicycles must be kept inside.
b. The book has to be returned at the end of the week.
c. The food has been cooked.
d. Knives should be taken away from babies.
很明显，这些句法结构己经被确认为未能正确使用英语中的被动式。学生还会犯一些其它方面的错误，其中之一是，常常把英语里没有被动语态的词（组），如 take place, occur, happen, belong to,appear, break out, rise, die等用作被动语态。
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