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英语高手好心人请进!我参加一个英语比赛,全国的,如果:小学六年级(可按初一水平)英文自我介绍,5分钟内,名字年龄等可空出来,有趣一点的,拜托大家了,好的加50分-200分不等_百度作业帮
英语高手好心人请进!我参加一个英语比赛,全国的,如果:小学六年级(可按初一水平)英文自我介绍,5分钟内,名字年龄等可空出来,有趣一点的,拜托大家了,好的加50分-200分不等
我参加一个英语比赛,全国的,如果:小学六年级(可按初一水平)英文自我介绍,5分钟内,名字年龄等可空出来,有趣一点的,拜托大家了,好的加50分-200分不等上面是要求!!!!!!!杜绝翻译机!!!!!!!好心人务必自己翻译!!!!!!!!!11
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I attended an English competition, the country's if: the primary six level (level-1 can be) self-introduction in English, 5 minutes, the name of age and can be vacated, interesting point, we ask, good plus 50 points -- 200 points.
I correspond with the first answer.100分求翻译,英语高手请进,谢谢!把网上流传的《猫和老鼠大结局》翻译成英文。万分感谢,好的加50分!_百度知道
100分求翻译,英语高手请进,谢谢!把网上流传的《猫和老鼠大结局》翻译成英文。万分感谢,好的加50分!
因此JERRY想利用一个老鼠夹子。”“我这次绝对会抓住你的哦,只是感到十分无聊。但是那只猫不是TOM。每次TOM都是假装被JERRY“打败”,但被本应比TOM要迟钝的多的猫追上。他想象到了那只猫气急败环的样子,闻到了一股老鼠味。也懂得了TOM去世时的痛苦的原因,假装自己被夹子夹住,而故意不去抓住他。果然。当TOM知道自己快要死去时。老鼠绝对不可能打过猫的。因为TOM去世而感到寂寞的JERRY想把这只猫当成新的打架对象,但那只猫却一动都不动,JERRY面前出现了一只猫。如同他以前向TOM做的那样,就飞速地扑向隐藏着的JERRY。因为与TOM打架是一件非常刺激的游戏。当TOM离开JERRY的时候,他发觉了,TOM已经不在这个世上了。内容如下。跟往常一样。如同TOM的愿望一样,被狠狠地咬了一口,是因为失去了重要的朋友。当那只猫接近老鼠夹子时。嘿嘿嘿。“我们又能够打架了,JERRY并没有感到悲伤。那只猫比TOM更小,JERRY并不知道。TOM只想是JERRY的打架对象:当JERRY长大的时候。JERRY就像以前跟TOM追逐时一样逃跑,那只猫向老鼠夹子走来尽量简洁,但这是为什么。有一天,TOM正在微笑着等待他,等待着那只猫的来临。JERRY感到很兴奋,TOM在JERRY的心中只是个关系不好的打架对象。因为他不想让JERRY看到体弱病多的自己。JERRY知道了TOM对他的友情,把那只猫给夹住,更迟钝,反而要夹住那只猫,在天上,只要故事大概完整就行。JERRY便藏在了墙角后。当JERRY得灵魂升天时,可以删减,悄悄地离开了JERRY。虽然JERRY也反咬他。虽然他的心有点不踏实。当JERRY快要死去的时候
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跟往常一样.但是那只猫不是TOM,而故意不去抓住他。Tom was only thinking of himself as Jerry&#39.他想象到了那只猫气急败环的样子,更迟钝,等待着那只猫的来临, Tom was no longer living in this world, the cat was walking towards the mousetrap。Because he was losing an important friend.。”“Now we can fight again.因为TOM去世而感到寂寞的JERRYAs Jerry had been feeling lonely after Tom&#39,JERRY并不知道。As he didn’t want Jerry to see his weak and sick image .嘿嘿嘿;s fighting opponent, Ho, Ho。”&quot,The cat sniffed a mouse’ smell,.虽然JERRY也反咬他。Just as Tom had wished, waiting for the cat’s arrival,反而要夹住那只猫.当JERRY得灵魂升天时,敬请加分.当那只猫接近老鼠夹子时,TOM在JERRY的心中只是个关系不好的打架对象;s soul ascended to heaven。Sure enough.当TOM知道自己快要死去时, Tom was waiting for him with smiles。Just as he had done to Tom.当TOM离开JERRY的时候.当JERRY快要死去的时候。When Tom left Jerry.果然,在天上;相信是最佳译文。To capture the cat,只是感到十分无聊,So Jerry wanted to use a mousetrap把那只猫给夹住。So he leaped towards Jerry in hiding,When he got close to the mousetrap,想把这只猫当成新的打架对象;s death,JERRY面前出现了一只猫。It was smaller and slower than Tom为您提供正确.因为与TOM打架是一件非常刺激的游戏,如同他以前向TOM做的那样。Jerry felt very excited.JERRY知道了TOM对他的友情,闻到了一股老鼠味.如同TOM的愿望一样? Jerry didn’t know。But this cat was no Tom,TOM正在微笑着等待他.”“我这次绝对会抓住你的哦。Because fighting with Tom had been a highly exciting game虽然他的心有点不踏实。But why,被狠狠地咬了一口。he left Jerry quietly。Nearing his death,也懂得了TOM去世时的痛苦的原因。As usual。When Jerry grew up,悄悄地离开了JERRY。When Jerry&#39,TOM已经不在这个世上了.就飞速地扑向隐藏着的JERRY。如非常满意.因为他不想让JERRY看到体弱病多的自己.JERRY就像以前跟TOM追逐时一样逃跑.&quot。By deliberately no catching him。One day a cat appeared before Jerry.因此Jerry想利用一个老鼠夹子。A mouse could never defeat a cat,Every time Tom had pretended to have been beaten by Jerry, Jerry realized that 老鼠绝对不可能打过猫的,Even though he was not sure of winning it。Though Jerry also bit the cat in reaction。But he was caught up and fiercely bitten by the cat which should have been slower than Tom。Jerry hs friendship to him,JERRY并没有感到悲伤。Ho,他发觉了.JERRY感到很兴奋.有一天, he pretended to have been cauBut this time I will surely catch you, but just very bored.TOM只想是JERRY的打架对象。当JERRY长大的时候, Jerry didn’t feel sad,但那只猫却一动都不动, as when pursued by Tom before.但被本应比TOM要迟钝的多的猫追上,那只猫向老鼠夹子走来,假装自己被夹子夹住.每次TOM都是假装被JERRY“打败”,When Tom knew he was about to die.“我们又能够打架了、地道的译文, the cat remained motionless.JERRY便藏在了墙角后。He wanted to make this cat his new opponent.,And understood why Tom had been in pain when dying是因为失去了重要的朋友.但这是为什么, luring the cat to the trap。Jerry then realized Tom&#39。放心用吧, in Jerry’s mind Tom had been just a fighting rival with a nasty relationship.那只猫比TOM更小。He could imagine how exasperated the cat looked,Jetty started to escape
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之前已经看过这样一模一样的翻译了,所以不能加分
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TOM只想是JERRY的打架对象,想把这只猫当成新的打架对象.但这是为什么, to Jerry, Jerry did not feel so sad.,只是感到十分无聊。When the cat came closer to the mousetrap。Although Jerry fought back to bite at the cat? Jerry was not sure, because he lost a very important friend。Hehehe.当TOM知道自己快要死去时.那只猫比TOM更小, just bored,就飞速地扑向隐藏着的JERRY,但被本应比TOM要迟钝的多的猫追上,更迟钝.当那只猫接近老鼠夹子时.虽然JERRY也反咬他,他发觉了。When Jerry&#39.跟往常一样.每次TOM都是假装被JERRY“打败”,JERRY并没有感到悲伤;&quot, and did not catch him on purpose。This is because Tom it was an exciting game to fight with Tom.JERRY就像以前跟TOM追逐时一样逃跑;We can now fight again.当JERRY得灵魂升天时.有一天.&quot.因为与TOM打架是一件非常刺激的游戏.JERRY知道了TOM对他的友情。One day a cat appeared before Jerry。When Jerry was about to die。Each time it was only that Jerry pretended to be beaten。”&quot,TOM正在微笑着等待他。Jerry felt very excited, Jerry started running,被狠狠地咬了一口, but the cat did not move.如同他以前向TOM做的那样,JERRY面前出现了一只猫, and slower, he pretended that he was caught by the mousetrap。He used the same trick he did with Tom.JERRY便藏在了墙角后,那只猫向老鼠夹子走来,闻到了一股老鼠味,假装自己被夹子夹住,而故意不去抓住他, but was caught up by the slower-than-Tom cat。老鼠绝对不可能打过猫的。”“我这次绝对会抓住你的哦,so he jumped toward where Jerry was hiding.“我们又能够打架了;s departuer.如同TOM的愿望一样,JERRY并不知道。And Jerry wanted to capture the cat using a mousetrap, and was bit fiercely,When Tom knew he was about to die,TOM在JERRY的心中只是个关系不好的打架对象。But why。Tom was only Jerry&#39。Jerry then hid behind the corner waiting for the cat to come, Tom was smiling to him。Just as Tom had wished.他想象到了那只猫气急败环的样子。It was smaller than Tom,But this time I will surely catch you.但是那只猫不是TOM。Like before,在天上当JERRY长大的时候。Tom was already living in this world when Jerry grew up.Sure enough。果然。Because he did not want Jerry to see him weak and sick,悄悄地离开了JERRY,TOM已经不在这个世上了, tricking the cat to be caught.嘿嘿嘿.因为他不想让JERRY看到体弱病多的自己;s soul went to heaven.虽然他的心有点不踏实。He also know why Tom was sad when he died。Jerry knew Tom&#39。so he wanted to make this cat his new fighting rival,把那只猫给夹住, that he would never win against a cat,等待着那只猫的来临.。But this cat was not Tom.JERRY感到很兴奋, the cat came to the mousetrap,although he was not sure he could win.&quot.当TOM离开JERRY的时候.因为TOM去世而感到寂寞的JERRYJerry felt lonely after Tom&#39,但那只猫却一动都不动。Just like he did with Tom before.当JERRY快要死去的时候。When Tom left Jerry.也懂得了TOM去世时的痛苦的原因,是因为失去了重要的朋友,反而要夹住那只猫, Tom was just a fighting rival with who he had a bad relation.因此JERRY想利用一个老鼠夹子;s friendship to him。He imagined the look of the cat,he smelled a mouse。he silently left Jerry
When JERRY grow up, TOM has not in this world.When TOM knew I was going to die,Quietly left JERRY.Because he didn't want JERRY saw weak and sick of yourself.TOM just is JERRY fight of objects.When TOM leave JERRY, JERRY didn't feel sad, just feel very boring.Because with TOM fight is a very exciting game.Though his heart a bit ungrounded,But this is why, JERRY did not know.As TOM desire as, TOM in the heart is just a relationship JERRY bad fight object.One day, JERRY presented with a cat.The cat than TOM smaller and more sluggish.Because TOM's death and feel lonely JERRYWant to put the cat as new fight object.Therefore JERRYWant to use a rat clip,Put the cat to clip tightly.As he used to TOM do.JERRY was hidden in the corner, after waiting for the cat comes.Sure enough, the cat came to rat clip.JERRY excited.As usual, pretending to be clamps, instead clamped that cat.Gnome male - &.He imagined to the cat defeated ring of appearance. FlusteredBut the cat not TOM.When the cat near rat clip,Smelled a rat strands of taste,Will rapidly to pounce on hidden JERRY.JERRY like we did with TOM chased as when I fled,But this should be more than TOM to slow the cat catch, violently bite.Although JERRY also bite him, but the cat remained stationary.When JERRY dying, he found it out.Mice absolute impossible played cat.Whenever TOM is pretend to be JERRY &beat&,Deliberately not to catch him.JERRY know TOM for his friendship.And also understand TOM died of suffering,Because lose important friend.When JERRY to soul into heaven, in heaven, TOM is smiling waiting for him.&And we can fight.&&This time I will definitely catch you oh.&
最后tom去变了性,回来和jerry生了个孩子
As jerry grow, tom was not in the world. when tom of his dying, quietly left jerry. jerry, because he didn't want to see the weak of his illness. tom wanted to be a fight. jerry left the object when tom and jerry. jerry was sad, but feel very silly. for a fight with tom is a very exciting game. though his heart a little uncertain, but this is why, jerry not Don't know. as the desire to tom, tom was jerry's just a matter for the fight. one day, jerry before a cat than tom. the cat is smaller and more. because tom's death was a lonely jerry like the cat fight for new objects. therefore, jerry want to use a trap for rats and put the cat to hold. as he had to do so. tom and jerry in the corner, waiting for the cat coming Sure enough, the cat came to a trap for rats. jerry feels excited. as usual, pretending that he was a clip live and hold the cat. gnome male - &. he imagined the cat out of breath. but the cat is tom. when the cat near trap for rats, and smelled a rat, he came rushing to the hidden jerry. jerry like to chase before tom when he fled, but ought to be more than tom is the cat chased the Although jerry, the biting him, but the cat, but there was no wind to move. when jerry dying, he found. the mouse can never played a cat. every time tom is affected by jerry &defeat and did not go to catch him. jerry know tom for his friendship. tom died understood the reason is that important friends. when jerry souls in heaven, i suppose tom is smiling waiting for him.& we can Fight. && this time i will definitely get you well.
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1.I can see some birds on the tree.5.My brother not at school.2.Helen do not absent today改错题如下.3.4.We have a breakfast at six thirty.What colour is Kate‘s trousers
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My brother not at school?is 改为 are祝你学习进步,更上一层楼.not 前面加 is3.I can see some birds on the tree1.We have a breakfast at six thirty.去掉a5.What colour is Kate‘s trousers.Helen do not absent today.on 改为 in4.do 改为 is2
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出门在外也不愁英语高手请进,我想问一个语法的问题,不太好形容,这句话是这样的:When I was a kid,Ithought I needed be(就是这里) good in soccer(这里也是),and look good ,and be popular ,and do well academically,so why is it harder for girls than boys?我_百度作业帮
英语高手请进,我想问一个语法的问题,不太好形容,这句话是这样的:When I was a kid,Ithought I needed be(就是这里) good in soccer(这里也是),and look good ,and be popular ,and do well academically,so why is it harder for girls than boys?我
这句话是这样的:When I was a kid,Ithought I needed be(就是这里) good in soccer(这里也是),and look good ,and be popular ,and do well academically,so why is it harder for girls than boys?我先来翻译一下:当我还是个孩子,我觉得我需要在体育上表现良好,看起来要漂亮,要受人们的欢迎,课业也要好,所以为什么女孩比男孩的压力要大呢?(开头已经说过是关于压力的讨论,所以结尾这样翻译.)为什么要用needed be?needed be怎么解释,怎么翻译好?soccer,我查字典是英式足球的意思,这在本句话中该怎么翻译.是否直接翻译成英式足球?英式足球是什么东西?请朋友们看看我的翻译,并给我提供更好的翻译,谢谢一楼的朋友,但是needed be 教材和录音都是这样的。我再去听听录音确定下。一楼的朋友说对了,教材居然错了,还是高教出版的呢!
问题1 need在这里做情态动词,用法和can一样,后直接接动词原型问题2 直接翻译成足球就行了,英式足球就是大众的足球,美式足球更倾向于橄榄球问题3 你翻译的很好
应该是good at soccer吧,没可能是good in啊
应该是 needed to be 就是需要的意思 你翻译的很好啊~soccer 就是足球 ..北美说法last sentence: 为什么女孩做这些要比男生难呢?英语高手请进!!!!为什么我能已经懂了英语单词的意思但是还是不能够懂得句子的意思啊?我是读英语专业的,但是我的语法很不好,我以前就是靠阅读拿分,但是现在这样的方法似乎不行了,随着学习的深_百度作业帮
英语高手请进!!!!为什么我能已经懂了英语单词的意思但是还是不能够懂得句子的意思啊?我是读英语专业的,但是我的语法很不好,我以前就是靠阅读拿分,但是现在这样的方法似乎不行了,随着学习的深
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关于这点,我想说的是 语法 是一个空架子。再怎么研究语法只等于安装一个架子,而中间是空的。你需要的是血肉,而不是架子。看语法书对你来说没有很大的效果。试问,当你儿时开始学说话的时候,父母是告诉你是什么语法吗?没有,而是一个一个词教你的。久而久之你慢慢也就学会了。而后,也许你并不知道你说的中文是什么语法结构。也并不知道别人说的中文是什么语法结构,但是你能够理解。试问,这个是你语法学的好的结果吗?我想这是因为你是用血肉堆出来的,而自然而然形成了你对中文的语言框架。既然你是英语专业,我想你势必会需要很大的阅读量,阅读是提高英语的最好办法。别相信什么多少天攻破英语语法难关,对一个学习英语的人来说,我们要的不是框架,而是血肉。今后你要用英语的话,会给别人讲你用的什么语法吗?并不是,而是要传达你的意思。大量的阅读对你的帮助会很大,不过这个不是立竿见影,需要长时间的积累。量变自然而然会引起质变的,只要你能够坚持阅读!我现在不知道你是大几。因为这个至少也得1到2年的时间才能让你对整个英语形成较强的理解能力。从另一个方面来说,即便你现在可以把所有语法都学了。可能仍然不能很好的读懂句子。原因很简单,你并不是在读句子,而是在分解句子,然后再将这个句子的各个部分进行人为整合。其实学习语言,起步要理性认识,慢慢的会从理性逐步升级到一定程度的感性。换句话说就是你的语感。语言的学习,忌讳的就是光看语法。你的句子翻译不出来,原因很大的程度不在于你的语法问题,而是在于你没有对英语形成一个英语的思维。而是用你中文的思维来分析这个句子该如何理解。而非用英语思维去直接理解。母语和外语肯定会有出入的。这点毫无疑问。所以楼主,别去看什么语法书籍,大量阅读,泛读才是提高你英语的法宝!以上是我的个人意见!
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我觉得不是语法吧,英语翻译首先弄清句子结构,经常会将语序打乱,被动与主动变换,而且要运用逻辑。建议可以去听一下翻译的课程
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都知道意思了还翻译不出来,主要原因肯定是对于句子的结构分析的不清楚,所以即使知道意思也不知道怎么放进去,跟语法薄弱肯定有关系。我觉得要学好语法就是点和线。所谓的点就是语法里面的重要的块,不如独立主格、非谓语动词、虚拟语气,以及各种时态语态等等。线的话就是句子结构,就是你要了解这个句子的清晰脉络,我想会是你目前最欠缺的。你现在只能是先突破点,然后再拿句法的线去串,没事多看长句子,...
楼主我也是英语专业的,我觉的主要不是你的语法问题,而是语感问题。因为翻译与语感关系很密切。建议你每天坚持听听力泛听与精听相结合,还有就是每天坚持做些翻译,我现在看的是上外的中口翻译,每天看看英语杂志和新闻,有兴趣的话看看英文名著其实是很有效果的,听的多看的多语感自然就培养出来了。我推荐一本语法书《大学生英语实用语法》是四川大学出版社的,我觉的很棒。顺便说下把分给我吧,都是我一个...
我也英语专业的,也有和你一样的感觉,我觉得这是正常现象,毕竟中国人的思维和外国人的不一样,写出来的文章肯定也不一样我个人觉得有一个方法不错,阅读的时候有意识地用“意群”来读,所谓意群也就是一个从句,一个短语或者是一个句式结构,把长句分成一段一段地来读,或者直接找出句子的主谓宾,剩下的其他的都是补充成分,基本上主谓宾找对了意思上就应该没有问题的~语法嘛,我个人也很讨厌,但是其实外...
你单练习语法是没用的关键是语感的问题语感的培养一方面肯定要多听多读另一方面就是平时听读时的技巧不要一个字一个字地看开始的时候可以用手指点着一个词组或一个从句的看逐渐变成一个意群一个意群的看到后来你要能从右往左按意群来读文章(没错,是从右往左)这点在日后你有了一定基础再练习你慢慢就能达到中文...
爱上英语!高中我的英语成绩不是很好,但我真的很爱英语,所以很刻苦。我学英语的窍门就是做题!英语奥林匹克竞赛书做了很多。最后英语竞赛省级一等奖!高考英语成绩全市第七139分!希望我的经验能够帮助你!语法的窍门同样是做题。祝你成功!...
我觉得不是语法吧,英语翻译首先弄清句子结构,经常会将语序打乱,被动与主动变换,而且要运用逻辑。建议可以去听一下翻译的课程 第一要诀:收听英语气象报告
有些教学录音带为配合初学者的学习,故意放慢语速,这对英语听力的训练是不够的。如果听语速正常的英语,初学者又会感到力不从心。英语气象报告的速度虽快,但词汇简单固定,内容单纯,重复的可能性大,而且在生活中随时都可以印证,是听力...
不是,是因为英语嘛是倒叙翻译的而且一个单词有很多种含义,有时就算知道单词的意思也未必能翻译出来。所以翻译是一个很有知识的学问,轻松一点学,往往会看到你想不到的效果。THANKS。上面的,复制得那么LONG,
把买的全解弄会就没问题了祝学习越来越好
看英语电视认识 讲/打(QQ/MSN) 英语的朋友讲多点嘛..去英语(加拿大不错..)国家几个月.
翻译的话,你的语文是不是比较薄弱呢?个人认为中英互译,需要两方面的语感呢。。。。。
想学好英语语法,有许多问题需要关注,以下给你几点建议,我是做外贸工作的,成天和老外打交道,以前英语是很烂的,也不是英语专业出身,后来我发现,我新招的几个下属,都是英文专业出身,专业八级的,但在与外国人沟通时也很差。还不如我呢。我将我自学时的几个办法,提供给你参考吧。第一,应试教育的确是很害人,导致我们学的英语太正统了。。。但实际与老外面对面交流时,有很多用不上,而且也会听不懂他们的口语。...
向你推荐一套教材——《新概念英语》。具体介绍可以在百度百科里找。你可以学三册或四册,或许对你的语法有帮助。
加我:我也是学英语专业的
语法是一种语言表达的习惯,看得多了,听得多了,说得多了,自然会驾轻就熟。如果你注意看英文影视或文学作品,它和我们的做题的阅读理解有很大差距,学习中遇到的材料和例句多是克意去应和某一语法或知识点的,这种训练失去了对语言本质特性的追求,提高的方法是自己寻求原汁原味的英文的材料阅读,形成语感,不要再去背高中的语法教材。...

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