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"In&our&time,&specialists&of&all&kinds&are&highly&over-rated.&We&need&more&generalists&&&people&who&can&provide&broad&perspectives."&
Please&note:&All&of&these&sample&essays&are&reproduced&as&written,&although&reformatted&for&this&document.&Misspellings,&typos,&grammatical&errors,&etc.&have&been&retained&from&the&originals.&
Specialists&are&necessary&in&order&to&allow&society&as&a&whole&to&properly&and&usefully&assimilate&the&masses&of&new&information&and&knowledge&that&have&come&out&of&research&and&have&been&widely&disseminated&through&mass&global&media.&As&the&head&of&Pharmacology&at&my&university&once&said&(and&I&paraphrase):&"I&can&only&research&what&I&do&because&there&are&so&many&who&have&come&before&me&to&whom&I&can&turn&for&basic&knowledge.&It&is&only&because&of&each&of&the&narrowly&focussed&individuals&at&each&step&that&a&full&and&true&understanding&of&the&complexities&of&life&can&be&had.&Each&person&can&only&hold&enough&knowledge&to&add&one&small&rung&to&the&ladder,&but&together&we&can&climb&to&the&moon."&This&illustrates&the&point&that&our&societies&level&of&knowledge&and&technology&is&at&a&stage&in&which&there&simply&must&be&specialists&in&order&for&our&society&to&take&advantage&of&the&information&available&to&us.&
Simply&put,&without&specialists,&our&society&would&find&itself&bogged&down&in&the&Sargasso&sea&of&information&overload.&While&it&was&fine&for&early&physicists&to&learn&and&understand&the&few&laws&and&ideas&that&existed&during&their&times,&now,&no&one&individual&can&possibly&digest&and&assimilate&all&of&the&knowledge&in&any&given&area.&
On&the&other&hand,&Over&specialization&means&narrow&focii&in&which&people&can&lose&the&larger&picture.&No&one&can&hope&to&understand&the&human&body&by&only&inspecting&one's&own&toe-nails.&What&we&learn&from&a&narrow&focus&may&be&internally&logically&coherent&but&may&be&irrelevant&or&fallacious&within&the&framework&of&a&broader&perspective.&Further,&if&we&inspect&only&our&toe-nails,&we&may&conclude&that&the&whole&body&is&hard&and&white.&Useful&conclusions&and&thus&perhaps&useful&inventions&must&come&by&sharing&among&specialists.&Simply&throwing&out&various&discoveries&means&we&have&a&pile&of&useless&discoveries,&it&is&only&when&one&can&make&with&them&a&mosaic&that&we&can&see&that&they&may&form&a&picture.&
Not&only&may&over-specialization&be&dangerous&in&terms&of&the&truth,&purity&and&cohesion&of&knowledge,&but&it&can&also&serve&to&drown&moral&or&universal&issues.&Generalists&and&only&generalists&can&see&a&broad&enough&picture&to&realize&and&introduce&to&the&world&the&problems&of&the&environment.&With&specialization,&each&person&focusses&on&their&research&and&their&goals.&Thus,&industrialization,&expansion,&and&new&technologies&are&driven&ahead.&Meanwhile&no&individual&can&see&the&wholisitc&view&of&our&global&existence&in&which&true&advancement&may&mean&stifling&individual&specialists&for&the&greater&good&of&all.&
Finally,&over-specialization&in&a&people's&daily&lives&and&jobs&has&meant&personal&and&psychological&compartmentalization.&People&are&forced&into&pigeon&holes&early&in&life&(at&least&by&university)&and&must&consciously&attempt&to&consume&external&forms&of&stimuli&and&information&in&order&not&to&be&lost&in&their&small&and&isolated&universe.&Not&only&does&this&make&for&narrowly&focussed&and&generally&poorly-educated&individuals,&but&it&guarantees&a&sense&of&loss&of&community,&often&followed&by&a&feeling&of&psychological&displacement&and&personal&dissatisfaction.&
Without&generalists,&society&becomes&inward-looking&and&eventually&inefficient.&Without&a&society&that&recognizes&the&importance&of&broad-mindedness&and&fora&a&for&sharing&generalities,&individuals&become&isolated.&Thus,&while&our&form&of&society&necessitates&specialists,&generalists&are&equally&important.&Specialists&drive&us&forward&in&a&series&of&thrusts&while&generalists&make&sure&we&are&still&on&the&jousting&field&and&know&what&the&stakes&are.
The&essay&is&carefully&constructed&throughout,&enabling&the&reader&to&move&effortlessly&from&point&to&point&as&the&writer&examines&the&multi-faceted&implications&of&the&issue&and&provides&compelling&reasons&and&examples&to&support&the&premise&and&take&the&argument&to&an&effective&conclusion.&Although&other&"6"&responses&may&not&be&as&eloquent&as&this&essay,&they&nevertheless&all&display&the&test&taker's&ability&to&articulate&complex&ideas&effectively&and&precisely.&
One&good&example&of&why&specialists&are&not&overrated&is&in&the&medical&field.&Doctors&are&necessary&for&people&to&live&healthy&lives.&When&a&person&is&sick,&he&may&go&to&a&general&practitioner&to&find&out&the&cause&of&his&problems.&Usually,&this&kind&of&"generalized"&doctor&can&help&most&ailments&with&simple&and&effective&treatments.&Sometimes,&though,&a&sickness&may&go&beyond&a&family&doctor's&knowledge&or&the&prescribed&treatments&don't&work&the&way&they&should.&When&a&sickness&progresses&or&becomes&diagnosed&as&a&disease&that&requires&more&care&than&a&family&doctor&can&provide,&he&may&be&referred&to&a&specialist.&For&instance,&a&person&with&constant&breathing&problems&that&require&hospitalization&may&be&suggested&to&visit&an&asthma&specialist.&Since&a&family&doctor&has&a&great&deal&of&knowledge&of&medicine,&he&can&decide&when&his&methods&are&not&effective&and&the&patient&needs&to&see&someone&who&knows&more&about&the&specific&&someone&who&knows&how&it&begins,&progresses,&and&specified&treatments.&This&is&an&excellent&example&of&how&a&generalized&person&may&not&be&equipped&enough&to&handle&something&as&well&as&a&specialized&one&can.&
Another&example&of&a&specialist&who&is&needed&instead&of&a&generalist&involves&teaching.&In&grammar&school,&children&learn&all&the&basic&principles&of&reading,&writing,&and&arithematic.&But&as&children&get&older&and&progress&in&school,&they&gain&a&better&understanding&of&the&language&and&mathematical&processes.&As&the&years&in&school&increase,&they&need&to&learn&more&and&more&specifics&and&details&about&various&subjects.&They&start&out&by&learning&basic&math&concepts&such&as&addition,&subtraction,&division,&and&multiplication.&A&few&years&later,&they&are&ready&to&begin&algebraic&concepts,&geometry,&and&calculus.&They&are&also&ready&to&learn&more&advanced&vocabulary,&the&principles&of&how&all&life&is&composed&and&how&it&functions.&One&teacher&or&professor&can&not&provide&as&much&in&depth&discussion&on&all&of&these&topics&as&well&as&one&who&has&learned&the&specifics&and&studied&mainly&to&know&everything&that&is&currently&known&about&one&of&these&subjects.&Generalized&teachers&are&required&to&begin&molding&students&at&a&very&early&age&so&they&can&get&ready&for&the&future&ahead&of&them&in&gaining&more&facts&about&the&basic&subjects&and&finding&out&new&facts&on&the&old&ones.
This&writer's&argument&is&rooted&in&two&extended&examples,&both&of&which&are&well&chosen&and&effective.&The&example&in&paragraph&2&begins&with&a&discussion&of&the&need&in&the&medical&field&for&general&practitioners&as&well&as&specialists&and&moves&into&an&example&within&the&example&(breathing&problems&and&the&need&for&an&asthma&specialist)&to&illustrate&the&point.&This&extension&from&the&general&to&the&specific&also&characterizes&the&example&in&paragraph&3.&Overall,&the&essay&is&well-organized,&in&part&because&the&writer&connects&ideas&through&the&use&of&appropriate&transitions:&"but,"&"usually,"&and&"for&instance,"&among&others.&
While&the&writer&handles&language&and&syntax&well,&several&bothersome&problems&keep&this&otherwise&well-argued&paper&out&of&the&6&category.&The&problems&vary&from&the&lack&of&a&pronoun&referent&("When&a&sickness&progresses&or&becomes&diagnosed,...he&may&be&referred&to&a&specialist")&to&an&error&in&parallel&structure&("...how&it&begins,&progresses&and&specified&treatments"),&to&loose&syntax&and&imprecise&language&("Generalized&teachers&are&required&to&begin&molding&students&at&a&very&early&age&so&they&can&get&ready&for&the&future&ahead&of&them&in&gaining&more&facts&about&the&basic&subjects&and...")&
I&am&currently&working&in&a&large&teaching&hospital&where&the&need&for&both&general&practitioners&and&specialists&is&obvious.&When&a&patient&is&admitted&to&a&general&medicine&floor,&the&general&medicine&physicians&are&not&always&able&to&deal&with&every&problem&the&patient&has&without&some&help&from&the&specialists.&It&would&be&unrealistic,&not&to&mention&unfair&to&the&general&practitioners,&to&expect&the&general&practitioners&to&know&everything&about&everything.&The&key&is&to&know&where&everyone's&knowledge&and&area&of&expertise&lie&and&use&their&strengths&to&optimize&patient&care.&
On&the&general&medicine&team&in&which&I&worked,&the&team&would&constantly&be&requesting&consults&from&specialists.&Whether&it&be&a&renal,&psychiatric,&orthopedic,&rehabilitation,&speech,&gastroenterologist,&or&any&other&specialist,&their&input&was&constantly&needed&and&used&to&get&the&patient&well&as&quickly&as&possible.&The&list&of&specialists&can&go&on&longer&than&one&would&think&and&it&is&just&impossible&for&one&person&to&know&everything&about&each&one&of&them.&
Although&the&need&for&generalists&is&apparent,&it&would&be&hard&to&survive&without&specialists,&also.&When&a&person&acts&as&a&generalist,&they&know&little&bit&about&everything,&but&certainly&not&a&totally&inclusive&knowledge&of&everything.&The&specialist&is&there&to&help&add&the&expertise&and&inclusive&knowledge&that&the&generalist&may&be&lacking.&The&most&important&thing&to&remember&with&specialists&and&generalists&is&to&recognize&both's&strengths&and&weaknesses&and&capitalize&on&the&strengths&to&achieve&whatever&goal&may&be&desired.&
This&essay&displays&generally&adequate&control&over&syntax&and&usage,&and&the&word&choice,&while&appropriate,&lacks&precision.&
The&fact&that&our&past&leaders&were&not&specialists&gave&the&creation&of&the&Constitution&the&ability&to&be&changed&through&amendments&passed&by&our&represented&leaders&of&today.&The&Constitution&was&created&with&the&ability&to&adapt&to&the&countries&needs&and&demands&in&running&our&society&as&it&changes&over&time.&The&generalists&approach&to&this&creation&of&a&non-specialized&Constitution&shows&the&need&for&todays&generations&to&continue&with&the&beliefs&that&a&specialist&would&not&follow.&
America&has&learned&from&it's&past&and&has&done&what&it&can&to&make&the&changes&through&adaption.&America's&greatness&has&been&from&the&generalist&leaders&of&the&past,&thinking&for&the&Americans&of&the&future.&Americans&with&a&broad&perspective&is&what&will&continue&to&lead&our&great&nation&into&the&twenty-first&century.&
The&writer&supports&the&claim&that&generalists&are&preferable&to&specialists,&offering&as&evidence&the&historical&example&of&the&generalists&who&created&the&U.S.&Constitution.&The&example,&while&relevant,&is&not&adequately&developed.&The&middle&paragraph&traces&the&flexibility&of&the&U.S.&Constitution&to&the&generalist&orientation&of&18th&century&leaders,&but&the&ideas&in&the&first&paragraph&are&too&vaguely&expressed&to&contribute&to&this&discussion,&and&the&final&paragraph&consists&of&unsubstantiated&generalities.&
Frequent&minor&errors&in&punctuation,&pronoun&use,&and&verb&tense,&as&well&as&imprecise&syntax&and&phrasing&(e.g.,&"Generalists&have&the&ideas&and&beliefs&of&what&America&is&made&of.&"&and&"...gave&the&creation&of&the&Constitution&the&ability&to...")&contribute&to&the&overall&inadequacy&of&this&response.&
The&writer&begins&by&disagreeing&with&the&assertion&that&"specialists...are&highly&over-rated"&and&then&attempts&to&define&and&contrast&specialists&and&generalists.&The&attempt&is&unsuccessful,&partly&because&the&descriptions&are&vague&and&ill-conceived.&
Whereas&the&example&of&going&to&a&"general&practitioner&doctor"&is&certainly&relevant,&the&writer's&claim&that&a&general&practitioner&would&tell&a&patient&with&chest&pains&that&the&problem&"may&be&heart&burns&or&something&else&that's&not&so&serious"&seems&far-fetched.&
The&response&is&further&weakened&by&poor&word&choice&and&by&numerous&errors&in&sentence&structure,&usage,&and&grammar.&These&problems,&while&not&severe&enough&to&seriously&interfere&with&meaning,&contribute&to&the&overall&rating&of&"2."&
First,&I&will&discuss&how&there&is&a&need&for&generalists&in&the&medical&field.&A&generalist&in&this&area&would&be&straight&foward&with&clients.&For&instance,&in&explaining&to&a&patient&they&had&cancer.&A&specialist&would&use&wording&that&you&would&believe&everything&is&fine.&
Second,&I&will&discuss&how&there&is&a&need&for&generalists&in&the&education&field.&In&this&field&some&instructors&use&"big&words"&and&try&to&out&smart&themselves&with&there&own&thoughts&of&character.&
Last,&I&will&discuss&how&there&is&a&need&for&generalists&in&the&workplace.&In&the&workplace&the&bosses&should&be&open&with&personell.&For&instance,&instead&of&acting&like&they&know&everything&they&should&be&open&to&knew&thoughts&and&ideas.&
The&essay&begins&with&a&tautology:&"...there&are&many&people&who&feel&generalist&are&more&broad&than&specialists."&Then,&in&the&three&short&paragraphs&that&follow,&the&writer&promises&to&discuss&"a&need&for&generalists"&in&a&specific&field,&but&none&of&these&discussions&materialize.&
The&rest&of&the&essay&only&confirms&the&sense&of&"fundamental&deficiency."&Rather&than&analyze&the&issue,&the&writer&unpersuasively&vilifies&specialists&as&people&who&use&their&power&to&deceive&and&mislead&others.&
Although&the&errors&(sentence&fragments,&incorrect&verb&tenses,&and&awkward&syntax)&are&persistent,&language&problems&alone&do&not&earn&this&essay&a&score&of&"1."&Rather,&this&response&fits&the&scoring&guide&criterion&of&showing&"little&evidence&of&the&ability&to&develop&or&organize&a&coherent&response&to&the&topic."&
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